Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-That is quite a piece
of artwork, Bic.
-This is like a stream of
consciousness of ideas
about poetry, dreams,
and education.
-The progression of
your thoughts is also good.
-I like the concluding lines;
everyone does have different styles!

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 Comment Written 20-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020

Excellent it was a piece of consciousness written in reply to the questioning of one mans subjectivity on another man/woman's perspective.

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020

oh! bye the way the artwork for real is a Picasso ... makes sense ... I thought therefore I did ... lol.

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Feb-2020

Thanks for sharing.

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Feb-2020

Thanks for sharing.

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova

Excellent

An amazing poem with wonderful insight. I really like the way it conveys the questions of why a poet writes and what they write what they write. It's so true in the end. We all do have different styles.

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 Comment Written 20-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020

Excellent glad you could enjoy.