I /We / One
Joining Nonets25 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
Community support and positive change are crucial topics to pursue in today's tense world. This is an excellent double nonet with a strong message everyone would do well to follow through on in personal lives. I enjoyed reading this very much.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Community support and positive change are crucial topics to pursue in today's tense world. This is an excellent double nonet with a strong message everyone would do well to follow through on in personal lives. I enjoyed reading this very much.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review, comments, and stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gail Denham
Nicely done with the two nonets - and the thoughts you express. That we could be united - in the States, not sure that will happen any time soon - the rift is growing wider. Only pray.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Nicely done with the two nonets - and the thoughts you express. That we could be united - in the States, not sure that will happen any time soon - the rift is growing wider. Only pray.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you, and yes there seems to be a bit of division over there, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine double nonet here about the community coming together and hand in hand building a better future for everyone, I love the concept and sentiment behind these words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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A fine double nonet here about the community coming together and hand in hand building a better future for everyone, I love the concept and sentiment behind these words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem a single person cannot do much by himself to change circumstances in the world around us, but when we find mind-like people we can accomplish many things together as one.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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A very well-written poem a single person cannot do much by himself to change circumstances in the world around us, but when we find mind-like people we can accomplish many things together as one.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very nice! I enjoyed reading your poem. I like what you wrote. How the sentences gathered speed the further it went toward the things we will do! I also liked the artwork!
Patty
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Very nice! I enjoyed reading your poem. I like what you wrote. How the sentences gathered speed the further it went toward the things we will do! I also liked the artwork!
Patty
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your great review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, it would be so nice, if we could join hands to make this world a better place. It starts with self examination to see where we can improve - then we work with others. It just takes that first step. Well said.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Yes, it would be so nice, if we could join hands to make this world a better place. It starts with self examination to see where we can improve - then we work with others. It just takes that first step. Well said.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you, and yes someone needs to take the first step, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is beautifully executed and very well written. You use the reverse nonets to their fullest impact possible. You start out where you, and perhaps we, as a nation, have lost our way, and our "sight of future needs." Then, you build momentum with the proclamation, "we will rise we will act." And keep building until, at the final line, you return to your title and theme, expertly with the line, "we shall change, I to we, we to one." This is a powerful and most needed mantra, of what we all need to be saying, to ourselves, and to each other. The presentation is fantastic with a wonderful choice of artwork. In your author's notes you say, "Wouldn't it be nice." No truer words have been spoken. Thank you for this uplifting and lifegiving poem.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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This is beautifully executed and very well written. You use the reverse nonets to their fullest impact possible. You start out where you, and perhaps we, as a nation, have lost our way, and our "sight of future needs." Then, you build momentum with the proclamation, "we will rise we will act." And keep building until, at the final line, you return to your title and theme, expertly with the line, "we shall change, I to we, we to one." This is a powerful and most needed mantra, of what we all need to be saying, to ourselves, and to each other. The presentation is fantastic with a wonderful choice of artwork. In your author's notes you say, "Wouldn't it be nice." No truer words have been spoken. Thank you for this uplifting and lifegiving poem.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Wow! how encouraging and inspirational this is, Thank you very much for this review and comments along with the stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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It was my pleasure. I meant every word I said. You are sincerely welcome.
Jesse
Comment from patcelaw
Nicely worded nonet and the reverse nonet. I wish you the very best for a good week, May your neighbors be a blessing to you.
Patricia
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Nicely worded nonet and the reverse nonet. I wish you the very best for a good week, May your neighbors be a blessing to you.
Patricia
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
How wonderful it would be if . . . . Your creatively-composed double nonet vividly describes how to change what is to what could--should--be, how to create true unity.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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How wonderful it would be if . . . . Your creatively-composed double nonet vividly describes how to change what is to what could--should--be, how to create true unity.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you, and yes it would be wonderful, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful! Yes, I so agree that there is such a need for unity not only in each country but in the world. But you said it perfectly with your nonet starting with 'I' statements but growing in the second nonet with "we" statements that it starts locally in our own neighborhoods. I know we can unite.
"I will seek nieghbours" (neighbors)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Wonderful! Yes, I so agree that there is such a need for unity not only in each country but in the world. But you said it perfectly with your nonet starting with 'I' statements but growing in the second nonet with "we" statements that it starts locally in our own neighborhoods. I know we can unite.
"I will seek nieghbours" (neighbors)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much, I have changed ie to ei (thank you) but believe "ours" is correct here down under as it signifies our next door...., as always much appreciated****kahpot
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You're absolutely right about that. "Neighbours" would be fine even if FS gives me a red line.
