An Aussie Christmas Cheer
A Merry Xmas Sonnet18 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, descriptive sonnet conveys a moving, sincere message
of cheer and well-wishing. Your rhyme scheme is accurate except for
"send" and "sleigh." "Globe" and "strobe"--good rhyming
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Your well-written, descriptive sonnet conveys a moving, sincere message
of cheer and well-wishing. Your rhyme scheme is accurate except for
"send" and "sleigh." "Globe" and "strobe"--good rhyming
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Hi Janice Thanks for ypur review and ai have fixed the rhyme with say instead of send So appreciate your eagle eye. Have a great Xmas with ypur loved ones also Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from Gloria ....
And a very Merry Christmas to you too, Chris. I can't imagine what it would be like to celebrate Christmas in summer. Oh wait, yes I can! lol
Slante, may your Christmas be merry and bright.
Thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
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And a very Merry Christmas to you too, Chris. I can't imagine what it would be like to celebrate Christmas in summer. Oh wait, yes I can! lol
Slante, may your Christmas be merry and bright.
Thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Hi Gloria, and you also, have great xmas . At the moment one would not think it is Summer here as it has been cold all December and we still have jumpers and heaters on a lot of the time however maybe it will fine up for Xmas Very strange weather at the moment . All the best Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from robyn corum
Chris,
What a sweetie you are-- again!! The end of the year is drawing near. Which means a new year will soon begin.
Which means we will all be waiting with baited breath to see the newest photo of naked Chris in the garden. What? A few months off?? Oh, well.
We have something to look forward to!! Thanks for making things merry!! Hahaha!! Hugs--
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Chris,
What a sweetie you are-- again!! The end of the year is drawing near. Which means a new year will soon begin.
Which means we will all be waiting with baited breath to see the newest photo of naked Chris in the garden. What? A few months off?? Oh, well.
We have something to look forward to!! Thanks for making things merry!! Hahaha!! Hugs--
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Hi Robyn Ha Ha no that is the 4 th May NWGD No I will be dressed up as Santa instead for our annual family Xmas picnic and I am the Santa and give everyone a present The kids big and small have to sit on my lap and occasionally I make them sing a Xmas Carol. We have a great time and ai love doing this I enjoy finding good presents for everyone and it is my Xmas thing So no ' bare butt for Xmas LOL. Hope you and all your family have a lovely Safe Xmas and NY Hugs back Cheers Chris
Comment from royowen
And a very merry Christmas from we here in South Australia to you Christine. You have composed a wonderful sonnet poem here, smooth and with your inimitable style and flair dear girl, well done, you've done a marvellous job my girl, blessings, Roy
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And a very merry Christmas from we here in South Australia to you Christine. You have composed a wonderful sonnet poem here, smooth and with your inimitable style and flair dear girl, well done, you've done a marvellous job my girl, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Hi Roy, Great to jave your Xmas wishes from SA i enjoyed doing this one but may do another for the Xmas poem contest as well Ha Ha. Still cold here in Ballarat not much Summer weather as yet. Hope it fines up a bit for Xmas celebrations.. You and your enjoy the Xmas Feast and send a hug to ypu all Cheers Chrisxx
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You too friend Chrissy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the artwork,
and the presentation is good, too.
-I like your sonnet greeting, as well.
-Very good thoughts of the
Yuletide season and New Year.
-I like your inclusion of
sharing stories "around the globe."
-I like the concluding couplet
very much, too.
-May you have a very Merry Christmas
and a wonderful 2020.
-Thanks for sharing, Chris!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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-I love the artwork,
and the presentation is good, too.
-I like your sonnet greeting, as well.
-Very good thoughts of the
Yuletide season and New Year.
-I like your inclusion of
sharing stories "around the globe."
-I like the concluding couplet
very much, too.
-May you have a very Merry Christmas
and a wonderful 2020.
-Thanks for sharing, Chris!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Hi Pam, Thanks very much and hes we do share from all around the globe but what fun and friendships we all make. Hope you and all your family and froends enjoy the festive season . Sending a Chrissy hug Cheers Chris
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you so much for your warm good Christmas tidings, Christine! I hope you and your family have joyful times celebrating together. You're right that it's such a blessing to be able to converse and share writing with each other all around the globe. Merry Christmas!
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Thank you so much for your warm good Christmas tidings, Christine! I hope you and your family have joyful times celebrating together. You're right that it's such a blessing to be able to converse and share writing with each other all around the globe. Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Hi Helen, You are welcome and yes we make some lovely friends here and ai do enjoy all the interaction we have through FS hard to stay away from. so have a great Xmas and stay safe Hugs sent Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from Sankey
Merry Christmas from another Aussie. I forget where you are sorry. 54kms West of Sydney here, on the East side of Penrith. Just one suggestion.Across Australian soil come(s) this yuletide,
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Merry Christmas from another Aussie. I forget where you are sorry. 54kms West of Sydney here, on the East side of Penrith. Just one suggestion.Across Australian soil come(s) this yuletide,
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Hi Sankey Thanks so much and I live in Ballarat Victoria and have added the s Have a lovely Xmas Cheers Chris
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A Merry Christmas to you Christine from the top of the world to the bottom and you will be celebrating it first! I enjoyed your tribute to Christmas here, love Dolly x
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A Merry Christmas to you Christine from the top of the world to the bottom and you will be celebrating it first! I enjoyed your tribute to Christmas here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Hi Dolly And a Merry Xmas to you from the other end LOL just a little poem this morning Glad you enjoyed it Have A good one Cheers Xxx
