Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Ulla. I chuckled at the irony in the first paragraph when the scream that woke her up was her own. This one certainly will not be mistaken for bedtime story. You did a great job writing it but I like it when the victim at least has a chance to get away. She has no chance. This is a good story that should win a contest. Good luck. Robert

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Thank you so much, Robert. I so appriciate the review and that you liked it. All best. Ulla:))

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 03-Nov-2019

you're welcome

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Truly a nightmare scenario that sends a chill coursing up the spine. One is left wondering about the ultimate purpose of the evil chef, but there is no doubt it will be life changing for the poor victim!

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Thanks a lot, Tony. I so appreciate it. All best. Ulla:))

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

So she is going to be his delicious little morsel, mwahaha. Yes I can imagine being locked in the cellar waiting for the stew pot to be hot enough would send a few chills up and down the spine.

Excellent entry into the contest Ulla. Wishing you luck with the committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Thanks a lot, Gloria. I so appreciate it. I've no idea where I got it from, but I had great fun writing it. Ulla:)))

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What a marvellous entry in this contest Ulla, great imagery and even better descriptions f this horrific experience of this young girl, well done Ulla, a great entry in this Halloween writing contest, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Thank you so much, Roy. I'm so gladyou liked it. All best. Ulla:))

Comment from Sankey

Exceptional

Arrgghh! Grose! But a good write. Not normally into Halloween and its groseness but you wrote it and I had to come by and check it out. I did not need the funny money but who cares. Creepy pic, too.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Awe, thank you so much for this lovely review and the stars. I'm mortified that it turns out I hadn't responded to this review. I can only appologies. All best. Ulla:)))

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You have wonderful entry for the Halloween Flash Fiction contest. I enjoyed reading this post. It kept me on my toes from the beginning to the end. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019

Thank you so much, Barbara. I'm glad you liked it. All best, Ulla :)))

Comment from Irish Rain

Exceptional

Spooky!!
I wouldn't want to be her!!
I've woken up screaming like that, years ago.
Terrifying!
A great entry in this contest, good luck!!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019

Wow, thank you so much. This is a great surprise. I'm so glad you liked it. I wouldn't want to be her either. The poor girl, as well. Thanks so much again. I so appreciate it. All best. Ulla:)))

reply by Irish Rain on 30-Oct-2019

You're most deserving, and most welcome!!

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Wow, I can hear the results. Cut the screaming lady, it's only my dog wanting to play. This should be a hair raiser for the course. Best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019

Thanks a lot, Ben, and for your good wishes. This is my first ever Halloween write for me. It was fun to do but pobably the only one ever. Thanks again. Ulla:))

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Spooky.

Aside from knowing you were going to be cooked, the awful thing would be smelling the broth.

Good luck in the contest. Great picture!

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019

Thank a lot, Yvonne. I'm glad you liked it. Ulla:)))

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Yuk. Tooo creeeepy for me. But that's what horror is supposed to be. And Halloween is the time for everyone to face up to it, and then, on November first, we can start talking about stuffing ourselves with a stuffed turkey on TDay. :)

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019

Hehehe, exactly. All so predictable, isn't it? I had fun writing this and it was a first for me, and as you know not me at all. Thanks a lot, Phyllis. Ulla:)))