nature's course taken
Haiku poem contest entry34 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The picture reminds me of Mazatlan, and your story is so alive and sweet:"rhythmic winds below" are chaining the coast line everyday. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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The picture reminds me of Mazatlan, and your story is so alive and sweet:"rhythmic winds below" are chaining the coast line everyday. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Iza for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
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You are welcome 😉
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.it Is so sad to see the beauty and power of the sea, and know when it hits land the horror that it will bring.
My prayers go out to all.
Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.it Is so sad to see the beauty and power of the sea, and know when it hits land the horror that it will bring.
My prayers go out to all.
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you Misscookie for the review my friend. Looks like the storm may drift away from Florida.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Janetsue
This is a very timely entry since the State of Florida is being threatened by a hurricane that is predicted to react a Category 4. Hearts go out to those living in its path. I am so glad you posted this noteworthy haiku in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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This is a very timely entry since the State of Florida is being threatened by a hurricane that is predicted to react a Category 4. Hearts go out to those living in its path. I am so glad you posted this noteworthy haiku in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Hopefully, this storm turns away from Florida.
Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
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You're very welcome, Steve! Blessings always, Janet
Comment from Bichon
Nature has been acting out of sorts recently and it can lead to terrifying results like you have written about. You did a great job with this one, best of luck
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Nature has been acting out of sorts recently and it can lead to terrifying results like you have written about. You did a great job with this one, best of luck
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you Bichon.
God bless
Steve
Comment from karenina
And "Dorian" is the name? What a timely and wonderfully written haiku! Nature poems are most often written about the beauty and serenity surrounding us... I like your spin--hinting of the fury barreling toward Florida in the next few days!--Karenina
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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And "Dorian" is the name? What a timely and wonderfully written haiku! Nature poems are most often written about the beauty and serenity surrounding us... I like your spin--hinting of the fury barreling toward Florida in the next few days!--Karenina
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you Karenina, Hopefully it will take a turn east.
God bless
Steve
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Oh! I'd be a nervous wreck if I lived in a place where hurricane season is ever a threat! I hope the whole thing goes out to sea!--Karenina
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It certainly needs to go out to sea.
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Oh, the decimated Bahamas! It has been weakening quickly now...If only the entire eastern seaboard could dodge this bullet!--Karenina
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That would be a blessing.
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South Carolina's getting hit bad right now...
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Yea, looks like they're going to take a beating.
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It eased up some! The poor Bahamas though!--karenina
Comment from estory
There's a kind of fatalism to this; we see the course of the storm taken, the coast threatened, and we feel the winds picking up. This is that moment just before impact, when we are left in the uncertainty of what we will be left with. Here we are again, waiting on Dorian. estory
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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There's a kind of fatalism to this; we see the course of the storm taken, the coast threatened, and we feel the winds picking up. This is that moment just before impact, when we are left in the uncertainty of what we will be left with. Here we are again, waiting on Dorian. estory
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Absolutely! The storms are unpredictable and careless. Nature is meant to be respected. Thank you for the review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, this is a very good entry to the Haiku contest. Well worded with he perfect accompanying picture. Three good lines written true to form and I particularly like line three - 'rhythmic winds bellow' - good use of metaphor. Good Luck - Dorothy
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Hello anon, this is a very good entry to the Haiku contest. Well worded with he perfect accompanying picture. Three good lines written true to form and I particularly like line three - 'rhythmic winds bellow' - good use of metaphor. Good Luck - Dorothy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Dorothy, for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Gail Denham
For sure - why do people live in Florida? I ask you. They have t-storms more than any other state - they're in direct line for hurricanes, one after the other. I pray they're all ready.
good poem
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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For sure - why do people live in Florida? I ask you. They have t-storms more than any other state - they're in direct line for hurricanes, one after the other. I pray they're all ready.
good poem
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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I agree, beautiful beaches I suppose. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Haiku and a very scary scene of cloud formation closing in, the best is to lock up everything and find some safe ground where lives will be saved.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Haiku and a very scary scene of cloud formation closing in, the best is to lock up everything and find some safe ground where lives will be saved.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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True, they have plenty of notice to get out. Thank you, Sandra, for the awesome review.
God bless
Comment from Patty Palmer
This seems too many storms have let loose over the past few years. It seems to get worse with every major storm that comes along. The picture you chose depicts every word of your poem! Good luck with the contest!
PATTY
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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This seems too many storms have let loose over the past few years. It seems to get worse with every major storm that comes along. The picture you chose depicts every word of your poem! Good luck with the contest!
PATTY
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Patty. I agree the storms seem to be more frequent and dangerous.
God bless
