Equal Share
rhyming poetry contest entry24 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
They are so dear - we have four sons - all dear in their own way. I know they don't necessarily pine for me, as their mum - but I think they like to be back at home from time to time and feel the love of their parents.
Nice poem.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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They are so dear - we have four sons - all dear in their own way. I know they don't necessarily pine for me, as their mum - but I think they like to be back at home from time to time and feel the love of their parents.
Nice poem.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Gail, Thank you and yes they are all dear and different in their own way and so that is a bonus no favourites though despite their banter Ha Ha Cheers Chris
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Equal Share", is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. It was a privilege to both read and review a work of this standard. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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"Equal Share", is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. It was a privilege to both read and review a work of this standard. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Duchess Thank you for youe lovely review and I am pleased you thought highly of it I look forward to you reading my next work Cheers Christine
Hi Christine. You're more than welcome.
I'll be looking out for your next post.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess
Hi Christine. You certainly deserved the lovely review.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful poem and tribute to your children, I hope they are reading or get to read this, you have summed up a Mothers love wonderfully and as you say equally, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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What a beautiful poem and tribute to your children, I hope they are reading or get to read this, you have summed up a Mothers love wonderfully and as you say equally, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Kahpot, Thanks so much and yes I am going to post this on Facebook for them they usually read my poem on there also Cheers for ypur best wishes Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet message for your children and they will enjoy your words as I did, good luck with the contest and enjoy the rest of your trip, best wishes, love Dolly x
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This is a sweet message for your children and they will enjoy your words as I did, good luck with the contest and enjoy the rest of your trip, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Dolly, Thanks so much and Glad you enjoyed my poem to the kids and yes only 2 weeks to go so my trip is running out and it is getting colder as we approach home no more sunbaking me thinks Ha Ha Cheers Chrosxx
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
To prove equal love to all three children equally, father divides his heart and gives three equal share to his children, after his death, when they will call out their Mom, father will come into each one's heart; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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To prove equal love to all three children equally, father divides his heart and gives three equal share to his children, after his death, when they will call out their Mom, father will come into each one's heart; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Alcreator, thank you for your support and it is my heart that I am writing about although my husband feels the same way Glad you enjoyed this one also Cheers Christine
Comment from royowen
When it came to taking a holiday in Europe, leaving our children behind, one was married, the other studying and living at home. We will miss them we thought, then with a breath, we said, "Let's go". Beautifully written Christine, in trimeter and aabb rhyme, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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When it came to taking a holiday in Europe, leaving our children behind, one was married, the other studying and living at home. We will miss them we thought, then with a breath, we said, "Let's go". Beautifully written Christine, in trimeter and aabb rhyme, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Roy, Thanks so much and yes they are never far away even when you are another 2 weeks before seeing them but we ring and chat and keep up to date But it is nice to just get away isnt it Many Cheers Chris x
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Comment from Sugarray77
Cute, cute, cute.... one for each of your children! I love this heart warming verse about your family, Christine. Good rhyming choices and presentation. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Cute, cute, cute.... one for each of your children! I love this heart warming verse about your family, Christine. Good rhyming choices and presentation. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Melissa , thanks you and yes my three kids are just terrific all different but very close family it is easy to write about them a cheers Chrisx
Comment from misscookie
Oh how sweet
your words touched my heart and soul, as I read each line I could her the love a compassion within every word. How blessed you and your husband is to have three lovely children that the love is so strong even when your away you think of holding them close to your heart once again.
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem.
Cookie
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Oh how sweet
your words touched my heart and soul, as I read each line I could her the love a compassion within every word. How blessed you and your husband is to have three lovely children that the love is so strong even when your away you think of holding them close to your heart once again.
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem.
Cookie
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Cookie ,Thank you my dear for you lovely review and we are blessed and they are a.ways near even when we are not Glad you enjoyed this Cheers Chrisxx
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Hello
your very welcome.
have a nice day
cookie
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what does those two square boxes mean?
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Hi Cookie Sorrry probably emojis with a smily face and thumbs up Meaning Thanks Cheers Chris
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thank you very much
cookie
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. That IS a terrific image to accompany your nice poem. Love how you have worded this. We do love each child equally. A super poem for the contest and best of luck in it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Christine. That IS a terrific image to accompany your nice poem. Love how you have worded this. We do love each child equally. A super poem for the contest and best of luck in it. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Marilyn Thanks very much and I loved this image and thought it so appropriate to my words yes we do no favourites despite their antics Oh ypur Mums favourite Bla Blah Blah They do it to stir me bit they know the truth Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
They say that no matter how many kids you have, you have more than enough love for all of them. I believe it. I can't imagine loving one less. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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They say that no matter how many kids you have, you have more than enough love for all of them. I believe it. I can't imagine loving one less. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Cindy Thanks very much for your review and yes enough love for them all plus also for their children what a bonus Cheers for ypur good luck wishes Christine
