It Is finished
Jesus last words...5-7-5 form61 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Such suffering! The pain is hard to bear, yet He bore it for us. How can anyone deny His sacrifice for us? Thank you for your poem... truly a powerful witness to our Lord Jesus' last moments on the cross.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Such suffering! The pain is hard to bear, yet He bore it for us. How can anyone deny His sacrifice for us? Thank you for your poem... truly a powerful witness to our Lord Jesus' last moments on the cross.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hi LisaMay, I cry when I think of all he went through for me...and just hope and pray I am worthy of Him...sigh...thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...love Linda xxoo
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I can't bear to think of the pain, but then I make myself think of it to appreciate it all the more. xx
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I can understand that...xxoo love
Comment from Ben Colder
This is probably the best 5-7-5 I have read here on Fan Story. I love truth no matter how it is brought forth. Jesus is Lord of all. I would love to see Him come today. Oh what peace that awaits.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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This is probably the best 5-7-5 I have read here on Fan Story. I love truth no matter how it is brought forth. Jesus is Lord of all. I would love to see Him come today. Oh what peace that awaits.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hi Ben, so good to see you my sweet friend...and hope you are doing well...WOW...thank you so much for a truly wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...like you...I wish He would come now...but trust His judgement on when He will come...I know it will be amazing...thank you so much...you made my night...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Janet Foor
It is a powerful picture to compliment your well written and powerful 5/7/5 poem.
It is difficult to look at and yet knowing he did all this for us says it all.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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It is a powerful picture to compliment your well written and powerful 5/7/5 poem.
It is difficult to look at and yet knowing he did all this for us says it all.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hi Janet, it's hard for me to think about all He went through for us...and still he loves us with more love than anyone can give...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...Blessings to you as well my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Aussie
The picture was a wake-up call to those who love Him. His love knows no bounds, we love because He first loved us. So good to see you were awarded All Time Best because this small edition adds credence to our belief. Well done my friend. Love Kace XXX
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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The picture was a wake-up call to those who love Him. His love knows no bounds, we love because He first loved us. So good to see you were awarded All Time Best because this small edition adds credence to our belief. Well done my friend. Love Kace XXX
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hi Kace, it truly hurts me when I think of all He went through for me...and still...He loves me like no other...I hope there will be a day Kace I will know I pleased Him...thank you for a wonderful review Sweetie Pie...and thank you for your lovely stars...you made my night...God Bless...and much love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from MissMerri
A lot was packed into these three lines Linda. I believe the last two lines sum up the primary moment of the crucifixion. The sacrifice was complete once and for all, and ALL is the best part of the story. None are excluded who desire to know Him. Thank you for telling the story so uniquely and creatively in your short poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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A lot was packed into these three lines Linda. I believe the last two lines sum up the primary moment of the crucifixion. The sacrifice was complete once and for all, and ALL is the best part of the story. None are excluded who desire to know Him. Thank you for telling the story so uniquely and creatively in your short poem. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hi Adonna, so good to see you my sweet friend...I hope Jesus knows how much I love Him...I'm not perfect...but I try to obey what He asks of me...He sacrifice His life for me...knowing the pain He would suffer...thank you for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from ShyWri
Excellent poem. This small poem shows the essence of the crucifixion in a few simple words. You also used capitalization to good effect. Thank you for the poem.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Excellent poem. This small poem shows the essence of the crucifixion in a few simple words. You also used capitalization to good effect. Thank you for the poem.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hi ShyWri, thank you so much for a wonderful review...and you are so welcome...love Linda xxoo
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You're welcome.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, I was immediately deeply touched by this poem and the image, so much so I sobbed as I read. This "Exceptional" rating is for the verse, that is so heartfelt in its write and profound promise. I weep every time I'm reminded of His incalculable suffering. This work defines His message most extraordinarily in its brevity and is worthy of more than Six Stars, again, in my opinion...
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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In my opinion, I was immediately deeply touched by this poem and the image, so much so I sobbed as I read. This "Exceptional" rating is for the verse, that is so heartfelt in its write and profound promise. I weep every time I'm reminded of His incalculable suffering. This work defines His message most extraordinarily in its brevity and is worthy of more than Six Stars, again, in my opinion...
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hi Eve, thank you my sweet friend for an awesome review...like you sweet girl...I cry when I think of all the pain and suffering Jesus went through for me...when our pastor described all that had been done to Him...I cried out loud...and still He loves me...us...thank you sweet girl for all your lovely stars...love you...Linda xxoo
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You are so very welcome, Linda. I appreciate your reminder of His magnificent salvation for us, even as unworthy as I am...Eve
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it's how I feel Eve...that I will never be worthy enough...sigh love you..Linda ...xxoo
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Obviously I have encountered a kindred spirit - I am happy to know you, Linda. May He bless and keep you...Eve
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I am happy to know you as well Eve...God Be With You...much love...xxoo
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My heartfelt thanks, Linda...Eve
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That picture is so awful Linda and I know the story and how cruel man can be to another, it chills me to the bone, and the story as you say is hugely powerful, your words resonated with me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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That picture is so awful Linda and I know the story and how cruel man can be to another, it chills me to the bone, and the story as you say is hugely powerful, your words resonated with me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Hi Dolly, I wasn't going to use this picture...but it was the closest to true...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Poetofheart2013
A beautiful and passionate poem full of great feeling and emotions. Very heartfelt and heartwarming makes you feel a lot different emotions when you
Read it. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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A beautiful and passionate poem full of great feeling and emotions. Very heartfelt and heartwarming makes you feel a lot different emotions when you
Read it. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Hi Poetofheart, thank you for a wonderful review...so glad it touched your heart...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A powerful Christian message in a three line poem. Good 5-7-5 syllable count. The artwork is appropriate. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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A powerful Christian message in a three line poem. Good 5-7-5 syllable count. The artwork is appropriate. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Hi Lance, thank you for a great review...God Bless...love Linda...xxoo
