The Interview Part 3
A second interviewer comes in to get Gunny's story.17 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
Whew! Well alright then. I would imagine that having to face a battle hardened soldier that you have betrayed and in a way caused the death of his beloved wife could be considered suicidal, makes the brother either very brave or a damn fool. O am happy to see you are still here, I did not see anything from you for a while and feared you had succumbed to one of your own wild fantastical stories. LOL.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Whew! Well alright then. I would imagine that having to face a battle hardened soldier that you have betrayed and in a way caused the death of his beloved wife could be considered suicidal, makes the brother either very brave or a damn fool. O am happy to see you are still here, I did not see anything from you for a while and feared you had succumbed to one of your own wild fantastical stories. LOL.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Still here. Thank you, Nomi, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Sylvia Page
This script was very well crafted. Dot has appeared as a spirit and claims that very soon they will all be together. It would have been rather of a shock to hear that his wife died in childbirth. Whose child? Couldn't be his as he was posted out for more than a year. Imagine his thoughts. Then realising that it was his own brother he strangled him!
Sylvia
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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This script was very well crafted. Dot has appeared as a spirit and claims that very soon they will all be together. It would have been rather of a shock to hear that his wife died in childbirth. Whose child? Couldn't be his as he was posted out for more than a year. Imagine his thoughts. Then realising that it was his own brother he strangled him!
Sylvia
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Sylvia, for the great review. Bill
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Welcome Bill anytime
Comment from damommy
Wow! Didn't see that coming. Dot's spirit lingers with him, or he imagines it does. What a thing to blurt out. Of course, I guess he's too old for earthly retribution now.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Wow! Didn't see that coming. Dot's spirit lingers with him, or he imagines it does. What a thing to blurt out. Of course, I guess he's too old for earthly retribution now.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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More to come.
Comment from Patty Palmer
wow! I didn't see that coming! Just all of a sudden he blurts that out. Your story held my interest right to that ending! I don't see any errors. Looks good just as it is.
Patty
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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wow! I didn't see that coming! Just all of a sudden he blurts that out. Your story held my interest right to that ending! I don't see any errors. Looks good just as it is.
Patty
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Patty, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm going back to read the ones I missed. This was so well written, the ghost of Dot is now waiting for Gunny to join her and TJ, and the baby possibly. I'm nipping back now. Excellent! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I'm going back to read the ones I missed. This was so well written, the ghost of Dot is now waiting for Gunny to join her and TJ, and the baby possibly. I'm nipping back now. Excellent! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Sandra, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In continuation, this script on the next part of the interview is scripted realistically about family issues, death and abortion; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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In continuation, this script on the next part of the interview is scripted realistically about family issues, death and abortion; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is very well done, Bill. I thought the manner in which his wife interacted in this post more believable as it was more subtle - YET where she spoke provided a poignant and powerful trigger prompting Gunny forward. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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This is very well done, Bill. I thought the manner in which his wife interacted in this post more believable as it was more subtle - YET where she spoke provided a poignant and powerful trigger prompting Gunny forward. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, MA, for giving this a look.
