Pinnacle of Insight
Just the level of introversion that seeps out forming words62 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I steer clear of difficult people, so I related to this one. The photo represents your wonderful poem very well. Especially partial to the phrase a human being "doing", for it is then we see the real person, is it not? The overall piece is quite well done. Good Luck and Good Job!
Using Pinnacle for an Acrostic is thinking outside the box and that, in turn produces wonderful poetry!
Good Luck and Good Job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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I steer clear of difficult people, so I related to this one. The photo represents your wonderful poem very well. Especially partial to the phrase a human being "doing", for it is then we see the real person, is it not? The overall piece is quite well done. Good Luck and Good Job!
Using Pinnacle for an Acrostic is thinking outside the box and that, in turn produces wonderful poetry!
Good Luck and Good Job!
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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I am very appreciative for your time and your comments. Your well wishes are quite encouraging.
Comment from Sanku
enjoyment of a human doing rather than human being ...I liked this line very much. Yes you do have a point .I only wish that I can take such a stand .Beggars can't be choosers. Life sometimes necessitates putting up with difficult people.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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enjoyment of a human doing rather than human being ...I liked this line very much. Yes you do have a point .I only wish that I can take such a stand .Beggars can't be choosers. Life sometimes necessitates putting up with difficult people.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your time to read and comment on my work.
Comment from diamondbogle
This is great. I to do not like to speak to incredibly difficult people but I feel like thats all I do. Its very frustrating. Overall I liked the poem. I felt it had good flow and I didnt see any mistakes.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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This is great. I to do not like to speak to incredibly difficult people but I feel like thats all I do. Its very frustrating. Overall I liked the poem. I felt it had good flow and I didnt see any mistakes.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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I am very grateful for the time you invested reading and commenting on my work. It is so motivating to be given the encouragement you have provided this humble human soul.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking write in both verse and image - fully compliant with the Acrostic form. I do have one suggestion in one word of the poem - please don't be offended, because I do consider this to be a meaningful write - this then, with your permission:
I would change the word "personal" to "personally!" in the 3rd line.
Other than that, grammatically speaking, I would not change a thing...Eve
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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In my opinion, a striking write in both verse and image - fully compliant with the Acrostic form. I do have one suggestion in one word of the poem - please don't be offended, because I do consider this to be a meaningful write - this then, with your permission:
I would change the word "personal" to "personally!" in the 3rd line.
Other than that, grammatically speaking, I would not change a thing...Eve
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Eva thank you however, the word is being missed read I have used persona with an exclamation point that appears as an l. Thanks so very much for your read and comments it is so valuable.
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Understood, and you are very welcome. Incidentally, just to remind you, there is much personal value in a person's name. My name is Eve, not Eva, and thank you for remembering it correctly in the future...Eve
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Inexplicable is the order and level of introversion about the pinnacle of insight, enjoyment of a human doing is more important; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Inexplicable is the order and level of introversion about the pinnacle of insight, enjoyment of a human doing is more important; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your time and comments
Comment from Kamisah Karim
A very transparent view on people.I choose not to socialize or be in a crowd much because it brings a lot of negative effects rather than positive.
Empty talks fill the air and in the end I will go back without much to shout about and tired too.Nevertheless at times, we have to face people for a purpose.I will do that with specific objective in mind.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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A very transparent view on people.I choose not to socialize or be in a crowd much because it brings a lot of negative effects rather than positive.
Empty talks fill the air and in the end I will go back without much to shout about and tired too.Nevertheless at times, we have to face people for a purpose.I will do that with specific objective in mind.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your time to read and make comments on my work.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Three14
Very cool message - definitely wish society would evolve and allow the human spirit to free up a bit. Fantastic acrostic - took me a few minutes to realize it even was one.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Very cool message - definitely wish society would evolve and allow the human spirit to free up a bit. Fantastic acrostic - took me a few minutes to realize it even was one.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. It is very validating and provides the propulsion for me to submit more work.
Comment from Gail Denham
Hmmm interesting way to put this - and I think I agree - what folks do is important - not just what they jabber on about. There is a limit to how much nonsense you can tolerate i believe.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Hmmm interesting way to put this - and I think I agree - what folks do is important - not just what they jabber on about. There is a limit to how much nonsense you can tolerate i believe.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your comments and recognizing the message.
Comment from Habib Oke
Wonderfullu written. I like your perception of human doing and insight. It's true that,we cannot always please people by lowering our self esteem. We can't please people by giving them all they want at our expense. But in some cases, we can also comprise to allow for good living, happiness and peace in spite of ourselves. Good job.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Wonderfullu written. I like your perception of human doing and insight. It's true that,we cannot always please people by lowering our self esteem. We can't please people by giving them all they want at our expense. But in some cases, we can also comprise to allow for good living, happiness and peace in spite of ourselves. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work...
Comment from flylikeaneagle
JLR: looks like you have a lot of reviews. I like the
crawling up slippery slopes. We can rest in who we are.
We don't have to do and do and do, we can be us.
Good points and lovely photo. I enjoy going to Garden
of the Gods in Colorado and resting on top. The view
is amazing. God is with us as we walk. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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JLR: looks like you have a lot of reviews. I like the
crawling up slippery slopes. We can rest in who we are.
We don't have to do and do and do, we can be us.
Good points and lovely photo. I enjoy going to Garden
of the Gods in Colorado and resting on top. The view
is amazing. God is with us as we walk. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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I love the heights one can reach in words and on the mountains along the Colorado range...
