The Sculptor's Clay
Repetition Poem Contest Entry18 total reviews
Comment from DragonSkulls
Wow, fantastic write, author. I'm not sure what the form is called but I love the dropping down a line per stanza. I use that quite often myself. Awesome accompanying art. Perfect layout and font. I love the thought of poetry's creation being formed without a design to follow. Excellent piece. I wish you the best of luck in the booth.
DS
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Wow, fantastic write, author. I'm not sure what the form is called but I love the dropping down a line per stanza. I use that quite often myself. Awesome accompanying art. Perfect layout and font. I love the thought of poetry's creation being formed without a design to follow. Excellent piece. I wish you the best of luck in the booth.
DS
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Well, thank you, Mr. Skulls for taking the time to read and review this. Such awesome comments. I don't know what this form is called either but I do enjoy using it. And, yes, the creation of all writing is given birth with a single thought. It is up to the writer to guide what direction it takes. With or without a compass. I prefer without. Thank you again for this and all those shiny stars!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent writing about following the leading of the muse to be creative and write from our hearts. Thanks for sharing this excellent reminder that expresses an appreciation for creativity.
Bill
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Excellent writing about following the leading of the muse to be creative and write from our hearts. Thanks for sharing this excellent reminder that expresses an appreciation for creativity.
Bill
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Bill. And thanks for acknowledging the reason for this poem. Creativity. Your comments are lovely and I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this. Very much.
Comment from the13thpoet
Great job!
We mold the words like sculptor's clay.
Arranging thoughts that cross the mind.
We trust the bond of heart and soul
and follow these dear instincts blind.
That verse right there.........the perfect description for most writers.
Brilliant!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Great job!
We mold the words like sculptor's clay.
Arranging thoughts that cross the mind.
We trust the bond of heart and soul
and follow these dear instincts blind.
That verse right there.........the perfect description for most writers.
Brilliant!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Wow! Thank you!! I appreciate you taking the time to read this and send me these lovely comments. And thanks for the stars. I'm glad you liked this. Awesome review!!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely Repetition poem. The line selected to repeat was well chosen and moved through each stanza fluidly. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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This is a lovely Repetition poem. The line selected to repeat was well chosen and moved through each stanza fluidly. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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First...LOVE your profile pic! Elegance personified. Wow.
Thank you so much for this lovely review. I'm glad you liked this. I appreciate your time to read and comment. I had fun writing this. Thank you again!
Comment from tfawcus
A good decision to run the repetition through all four verses in the form of a cascade. The repeating line is well chosen, representing and underlining the central idea of the poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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A good decision to run the repetition through all four verses in the form of a cascade. The repeating line is well chosen, representing and underlining the central idea of the poem.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my posting. I'm glad you liked this. Loved your comments and your generous rating! Thanks again!!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
You've captured the writing experience so well in this poem. One line seems out of sync with the others. Creations built without design--how is the wordsmith sculpting if they don't have a design in mind? Splendid use of the viator form.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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You've captured the writing experience so well in this poem. One line seems out of sync with the others. Creations built without design--how is the wordsmith sculpting if they don't have a design in mind? Splendid use of the viator form.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review this piece. Creations built without design refers to not utilizing a blue print in the beginning. I appreciate this generous rating and your specific comments very much. Thanks again!
Comment from JanPerry
An artistic expression of words with a dove. Lovely verses. Words not yet clear in the mind moulded by your imagination. Well said.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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An artistic expression of words with a dove. Lovely verses. Words not yet clear in the mind moulded by your imagination. Well said.
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Jan! I appreciate this lovely review. I'm glad you liked this. It was fun to write. Thanks again!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is definitely deserving of six stars, and I have none :(
I really love your repeating line and your rhyme.
I especially appreciate and enjoy the depth of meaning within each stanza.
Beautiful overall presentation, including color scheme and font choice.
Exquisite!
Gale
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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This is definitely deserving of six stars, and I have none :(
I really love your repeating line and your rhyme.
I especially appreciate and enjoy the depth of meaning within each stanza.
Beautiful overall presentation, including color scheme and font choice.
Exquisite!
Gale
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for this great review and the big six offer! Your comments are lovely and I'm glad you liked this. Your kind words are much appreciated. Thanks again.
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It was my pleasure :)
