He Loves Me
5-7-5 Contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Hi Patricia!
What a wonderful spiritual offering for tonight's FS peek.
Comment that does not affect my review: I'd consider adding a comma after 'understand,'and then drop the capitalization for 'But.' From my view, it reads as a long sentence. Of course, you have final control and it is your poetic style to capitalize the start of each line.
Mark
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Hi Patricia!
What a wonderful spiritual offering for tonight's FS peek.
Comment that does not affect my review: I'd consider adding a comma after 'understand,'and then drop the capitalization for 'But.' From my view, it reads as a long sentence. Of course, you have final control and it is your poetic style to capitalize the start of each line.
Mark
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from Carla Trinklein
This reminds me of a quote by Martin Luther, the reformer, "God doesn't love us because of our worth. We are of worth because of His love." This poem says it all... we are blessed beyond belief because of His love.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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This reminds me of a quote by Martin Luther, the reformer, "God doesn't love us because of our worth. We are of worth because of His love." This poem says it all... we are blessed beyond belief because of His love.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry Patricia. Your words are succinct as to your faith. This is a great presentation and affirmation of your faith. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry Patricia. Your words are succinct as to your faith. This is a great presentation and affirmation of your faith. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
There is no truer sentiment ever written than what you express with this limiting structure! It is a question pondered by many and thankfulness because of faith by even fewer! Great job on this one!
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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There is no truer sentiment ever written than what you express with this limiting structure! It is a question pondered by many and thankfulness because of faith by even fewer! Great job on this one!
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
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So very welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write Patricia and to know you are loved is a wonderful feeling and your belief is of great comfort to you, your write is much enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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A faithful write Patricia and to know you are loved is a wonderful feeling and your belief is of great comfort to you, your write is much enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
