Bounce
Love's reflections and vibrations.14 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Lisa. I liked this energetic and vibrant verse. The Bounce theme in repetition works really well to carry the reader through with the idea of living life, sharing joy, relying on each other. A very well-written poem.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Hello Lisa. I liked this energetic and vibrant verse. The Bounce theme in repetition works really well to carry the reader through with the idea of living life, sharing joy, relying on each other. A very well-written poem.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a highly effective poem. The different takes you've taken on a single concept, bounce, is bother entertaining and, in many cases, humorous. The last line is an uplifting sign-off.
Thank you for brightening my day. :)
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This is a highly effective poem. The different takes you've taken on a single concept, bounce, is bother entertaining and, in many cases, humorous. The last line is an uplifting sign-off.
Thank you for brightening my day. :)
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Glad I could add to your day! Thanks for this nice review.
Comment from Heather Knight
I love the structure of your poem, the repetition that matches the title and the occasional alliteration.
You've used some beautiful images such as
that sparkle like diamonds
beyond my self-absorbed dark
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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I love the structure of your poem, the repetition that matches the title and the occasional alliteration.
You've used some beautiful images such as
that sparkle like diamonds
beyond my self-absorbed dark
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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I'm pleased that you enjoyed my poem. I hope you are having a lovely day... I see it is about 11.15am in Madrid.
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It is. I've been grading exams till now, but I've decided to take a break. I love being a teacher, but exams are boring.
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Yes, all that paperwork to attend to. Good luck with getting it finished so you can write a story.
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Thanks. I think I'm done marking this morning. More in the evening...
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks making visual and imaginary adventures in romantic spirits and love's reflections and vibrations for ecstatic enjoyment and fulfillment; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This speaks making visual and imaginary adventures in romantic spirits and love's reflections and vibrations for ecstatic enjoyment and fulfillment; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review. All the best to you. LM
