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My Life

Reflecting on my life

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Comment from karenina
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Pam, my friend! Someone mentioned on the Forum that you were very ill and had not posted for a bit and I was so pleased to see you post when I signed on today--although so sorry that your health seems to be declining. I love your work--your poetry and art has endeared itself to me since the very beginning and I want you to know I hope and pray God gives you respite and you remain alive without pain and inspiring all of us for years to come. I would miss you terribly, dear one--if God chooses to call you Home. My faith is strong and I believe you and I will meet in eternity... Let's try to stay friends and fellow poets here on earth for a while more though. That would be a blessing. Anything I can do for you? Just message! Much Love--Karenina

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

Comment from Mastery
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Sorry to hear it is that bad, Pam. I sincerely love you as a friend and wonderful artist and mentor. I will miss you and unfortunately I feel I won't be far behind you, perhaps even beat you to the gate the way things have gone for me this past none months.

Your poem mis lovely. It ha such realism and captures the imagination from start to finish.

God bless you. I will get thos paintings to you in a hurry. Promise. X Your friend Bob

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for continuing to post even when I'm sure it's not easy for your to do. I admire your creative expression in poetry and paint and am so happy to have met you here. Adding you to my prayers. Hugs!

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Pamusart
I love our posrive attitude about your final destiny when you said this so well in your rhyming poem.

My soul might live beyond my death;
won't know for sure until the end.
I'll take one last and ratt'ling breath
before I claim him as a friend.
Gert

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this moving,
descriptive poem, which goes from childhood memories to the memories being made now--full circle.

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very wll-written heartfelt poem, I am very sorry to hear you do not feel so good. When we know our days are little we can either go into panic mode or we can wait calmly until the end.

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

Comment from susand3022
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Hi Pam, I really love these poems you're writing. I'm sorry for your physical state, but glad that you are doing well mentally. That's really all we can ask. My parents are beginning to forget things and it's making them crazy. Then again, they're 88, and 91so we know they're allowed! I'm so glad that you can still write and share your feelings about this time with us, your friends on FS. You mean so much to us. Be well... :)

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I know of your many health issues that you have shared on FS, Pam. This is a great way of acknowledging your life. We all deal with what we are given. I would say that you did an awesome job. Your lines flow well with great rhymes. Your message is loud and clear. I have missed your special paintings with your great tankas. Thanks for sharing and please know that I care about you and yours. Jan

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

Comment from Pantygynt
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One of the problems with this site is that when the posting stops we seldom know whether it is as a result of death, or simply a desire to move on. I look forward to those nine posts and sincerely hope I get to write my banal platitudes on every one of them.

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

Comment from Sugarray77
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Pam, I love your upbeat attitude that is so reflected in your poem. You have always been good with verse. I am already missing you and wish it were possible for you to write for many more years.... here's to missing you, my friend.

Melissa

 Comment Written 21-May-2019