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My 2019 NaPoWriMo poetic exploration.

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Comment from Sasha
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this is a lovely entry for day 22 of your NaMoPriMo 2019 chapter for your book on Giving. It is a well written Wrapped Refrain, that meets all the criteria perfectly. I sincerely wish you all the best in the month long contest.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
    Hi Sasha!
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! It was my first wrapped refrain. And, as you know, I love to write about Alaska! :) Thanks for taking the time with this one.

    Kim
reply by Sasha on 25-Apr-2019
    I am bad at understanding the rules for the all too many poetic forms, I get them all mixed up. I am sure you did a great job with this style.
Comment from Wendy Winter
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I'm sold. Send me the address, I'll google map it and be right there. Nice writing too. Your words brought me there in my head and made me want to go in person. I particularly like how you shared what nature does for you. Beautiful.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
    Hi Wendy -
    With a last name like Winter, I think you might want to consider moving here, you'd fit right in! lol We had another snow storm this week - winter just doesn't want to give up! I live in Fairbanks, in the interior, as we call it. It will be easy to find on the map. Thank you for the honor of this tremendous six star review.

    Kim
Comment from damommy
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A beautiful photo. I'd love to visit your Alaska some day. I can only imagine the grandeur of the lovely state.

You did a very good job with the wrapped refrain. Thank you for participating in Potlatch Poetry.

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
    Hi Yvonne!
    The wrapped refrain was a fun one to try. I decided I couldn't go wrong writing about Alaska. I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece. I'm thankful that you and Jan have kept Poetry Potlatch alive!!

    Kim
Comment from lyenochka
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Wow! Thank you for sharing about your Alaska! What a beautiful picture and I always appreciate how you share about the wild and natural beauty of your state!

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
    Hi Helen,
    I hadn't tried a wrapped refrain before, so I decided that writing about Alaska was the best way to go on a new form. Thank you for the exuberant review! I love it!

    Kim