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My 2019 NaPoWriMo poetic exploration.

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Comment from Earl Corp
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I didn't realize so many tragic events occurred on April 15. This year was also the 20th anniversary of the Columbine massacre. I can tell this was an event that meant a lot to you. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019

Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Dovey,

What a heartbreaking tragedy for this amazingly iconic house of worship and the French culture to be so damaged. I really appreciate your notes and am glad funds are being sent to our wonderful ally for restoration! Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019

Comment from Michele Harber
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This is a very well-done Acrostic about a very sad occurrence. You include a good deal of information but, rather than reading as a news report, it strikes a tone of reverence and regret. I was lucky enough to visit Notre Dame on my only trip to France, and I definitely share your sadness. Thank you for the additional notes at the end. I had no idea that all those horrible incidents occurred on the same date.

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019