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NaPoWriMo 2019

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "The Fourth Of The Fourth"
A poem a day - April 2019

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Comment from Ross E Silke
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This is fun and uplifting. Very easy to read and feel the emotions felt in this one. Cleverly composed and orchestrated. It has good rhyme and flow. You can really feel the joy and cheer of the celebration. Nice read! And happy birthday!! I like your colour choices and the childlikeness of the imagery and font style makes it look kind of like a birthday cake in your presentation too. Colourful all around in your presentation and in your poetry. Best,

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Ross :) Thank you so much for your kind feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Debra,

Happy Birthday, my friend!

This poem is a lovely way to celebrate! Your poem is very well written, with a celebratory feel and great visual appeal. Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful time celebrating your 44th! Jan

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Jan :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Shirley McLain
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Loved the poem and Happy Birthday. I hope it is your best one yet. I didn't see a thing wrong with your lovely poem. Have a great day. Blessings Shirley

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Shirley :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Well, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
You've given all of us on FanStory a gift on YOUR bday, though, with this adorable poem!!

I hope are loved and adored by your loved ones the whole day through. xo

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Rachelle :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both! Pleased to report I was thoroughly spoiled yesterday! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Heather Knight
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Cool indeed! Very cheerful poem and lots of fours! You are ten years younger than me. Still a baby...
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Maria :) Thanks for your great feedback! Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Ah I love it and Happy Birthday to you, Id sing, but you would never talk to me again. Very nicely done and I truly love the form as it is cute and flows nicely.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Barb :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Sally Law
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A root beer for me!
Happy Birthday to you,
Happy Birthday to you,
Happy Birthday, dear Debra,
Happy Birthday to you...and many more!
Be blessed my friend on your birthday and always!
Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Sal :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes (a song, no less!) I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
reply by Sally Law on 05-Apr-2019
    By the way, I sing like Celine Dion, so imagine what this might sound like from me! La-la-la...
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    I could close my eyes and imagine I was on the Titanic with Leonardo di Caprio!
reply by Sally Law on 05-Apr-2019
    Way too young for me, besides, I am still crazy for my husband!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Likewise! It?s just the theme tune sung by feline Dion that took me there! X
Comment from heavenempress
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Waal, hi, Happy birthday hey! Not far from 44th birthday too but will never catch you. I pray that may the Almighty bless you with many more fruitful years. Nice presentation hey and wish to join you for a beer.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from beizanten
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a cute picture thanks for sharing. the poem is short and simple but pretty good and lighthearted and written in easy to understand words. May you have a jolly good day

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Happy Birthday! Your poem was fun to read. I like the rhymes and smooth flow. It is super to celebrate another year. Take care and many more happy happys. Jan

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Jan :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)