On Giving...
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Unlisted"My 2019 NaPoWriMo poetic exploration.
13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine write Kim and our phones can be intrusive but few people phone me these days! So it isn't much of an intrusion. But leaving all communications open for your muse to run free and tantalise with words is a wonderful idea, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
  |
A fine write Kim and our phones can be intrusive but few people phone me these days! So it isn't much of an intrusion. But leaving all communications open for your muse to run free and tantalise with words is a wonderful idea, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
-
Hi Dolly!
I'm hoping to keep my muse on speed dial this month! :) I appreciate the lovely comments.
Kim
Comment from tfawcus
Wow! She sounds like a thoroughly modern muse! I hope you have an appropriate set of chimes for when she rings in with a fresh idea. The Sapphonic Triad is a flexible form. You use it well.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
|
Wow! She sounds like a thoroughly modern muse! I hope you have an appropriate set of chimes for when she rings in with a fresh idea. The Sapphonic Triad is a flexible form. You use it well.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
-
Hi Tony!
What a tremendous idea! I'll have to get her a ring tone all her own!! I may have to work that into another poem! ;) Thank you for the fun review!
Kim
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Dovey,
This is a great poem and not such a bad idea if one can pull it off. Ha ha ha! I love the ending. Nothing here to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
|
Hi Dovey,
This is a great poem and not such a bad idea if one can pull it off. Ha ha ha! I love the ending. Nothing here to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
-
I have to admit that I'm not very good and getting too far away from my phone lol but sometimes I want to!! Thanks for the wonderful comments, Jan!
Kim
