Up, Up and Away
There's always someone wanting to bring you down.16 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
There are lots of envious people who would love to burst your bubble
But you are right, the view is great from way up there
away from all the chaos.
Excellent picture
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
There are lots of envious people who would love to burst your bubble
But you are right, the view is great from way up there
away from all the chaos.
Excellent picture
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your supportive review and good wishes. It's best to clear out when others are being destructive.
Comment from Raul1
This is a pretty good 3-5-3 contest entry. I think that you did it very well. Of course, most of us cross into pessimism, but we can also ignore it. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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This is a pretty good 3-5-3 contest entry. I think that you did it very well. Of course, most of us cross into pessimism, but we can also ignore it. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Yep, it's all about attitude.
Thanks so much for your review and supportive comments.
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You're welcome
Comment from royowen
I love the idea that precipitated this charming post my friend. When I was a young boy I dreamt I could levitate to escape all the problems on the ground, this is virtually the same thing, rising on the wings of an eagle is another, well done, excellent entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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I love the idea that precipitated this charming post my friend. When I was a young boy I dreamt I could levitate to escape all the problems on the ground, this is virtually the same thing, rising on the wings of an eagle is another, well done, excellent entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Too true; it's all about altitude and attitude.
Thanks so much for your review Roy.
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Well done
Comment from mermaids
You have an excellent use of words that says much. "Rise above" is a great last line, it gives important advice. In few words, you say much about moving forward and not being down.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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You have an excellent use of words that says much. "Rise above" is a great last line, it gives important advice. In few words, you say much about moving forward and not being down.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review.
It's our own responses and attitudes that can protect us.
Comment from moongirlwriter
Isn't that the truth? I do so love hot air balloons and would absolutely go up, up and away any ol day. The pic goes perfectly with this positive little verse. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Isn't that the truth? I do so love hot air balloons and would absolutely go up, up and away any ol day. The pic goes perfectly with this positive little verse. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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... away in our beautiful balloons!
Just climb aboard and leave behind those who want to hold you back .
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:)
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I absolutely love this short work. Its clever, to the point, and makes the reader laugh out loud. Some truths can be said with both bite and a smile. This writer managed both with much success. I found nothing to tweak or adjust. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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I absolutely love this short work. Its clever, to the point, and makes the reader laugh out loud. Some truths can be said with both bite and a smile. This writer managed both with much success. I found nothing to tweak or adjust. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Wowee, a 6!! thank you so much. And also thanks for recognising the bite with a smile contained in this poem.
