(Acrostic) Hatred
The green eyed monster16 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello, Jen. You have written a very wise verse. Your points are made succinctly and with a lot of truth. Great write. The presentation and artwork are perfect for this poem and tie it all together very well.
Melissa
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Hello, Jen. You have written a very wise verse. Your points are made succinctly and with a lot of truth. Great write. The presentation and artwork are perfect for this poem and tie it all together very well.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks melissa, your comments are much appreciated. Jen.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your acrostic poem is very well-written, conveying a realistic theme.
So often those who regularly speak negatively about others ARE envious.
Rhyming adds an extra challenge to the acrostic. Yours is good.
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Your acrostic poem is very well-written, conveying a realistic theme.
So often those who regularly speak negatively about others ARE envious.
Rhyming adds an extra challenge to the acrostic. Yours is good.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks for your great review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with the profound words in your acrostic poem here, very clever and so true. The green eyed monster can destroy your self esteem, love Dolly x
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I so agree with the profound words in your acrostic poem here, very clever and so true. The green eyed monster can destroy your self esteem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks for your great review
Comment from Teresa Alford
Good poem, well-written with a good flow. Right on spot with the subject matter. There certainly are those who critique as a way to feel better about their self. Good job. TA";-)
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Good poem, well-written with a good flow. Right on spot with the subject matter. There certainly are those who critique as a way to feel better about their self. Good job. TA";-)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks Teresa
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks hatred is vice it can destroy relation, peace and happiness in both ways to both persons, one loses the dear ones; well said, well done. Publish works that's readable every day and tomorrows -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks hatred is vice it can destroy relation, peace and happiness in both ways to both persons, one loses the dear ones; well said, well done. Publish works that's readable every day and tomorrows -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Sam Saylor
There is a lot of potential for people to do that. Its interesting to see it from the inside and the outside. I really like how this is written and think its a good enty to the competition.
Sam
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There is a lot of potential for people to do that. Its interesting to see it from the inside and the outside. I really like how this is written and think its a good enty to the competition.
Sam
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you Sam.
