Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Tom,

What fun! THIS is about the only snake I would want to run into - and that's even questionable, because it probably signifies that a mom is nearby. YUCK! ICK!
Pa-TOOEY!

Couple of things -

1.) the 'soon' seems out of place to me (just a note)

2.) the 'N' seems to have a cross-through over it. Is that my imagination?

Thanks for honoring Joy in this way. I'll make sure she sees it. Have a marvelous day!

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019

Thank you Robyn. I needed the "soon" to balance the text so that key letter would be centered., plus I loved the alliteration it brought. You are right about the "N", I mist have inadvertantly touched something in the Editor. Fixed it. Thanks for the notice.

Comment from writerjen

Excellent

Clever acrostic poem. Great word choices to make the acrostic work, but I had to look up corporeal. New word added to my vocabulary. Enjoyable poem, great picture to enhance the meaning. Nicely done.

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019

Thank you writerjen. Always glad to share formats and vocabulary. Maybe I should footnote the definition.