Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is the second post today about sunrises, but don't think I don't love this. Because of my eyesight, I don't get to see this very often. It's nice to see it through your eyes. My eyes don't tolerate bright light at all. This is wonderful eye candy! Thank you so much!
Sal

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Hello, Sally. I am so sorry about your vision. My dad has macular degeneration and has your same problem. But if my words can give you a glimpse of the pink dawn I am very grateful for this poetic site. All the best.

Melissa

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation, Melissa.
-The imagery is effective in
describing the beach and the sky at sunrise.
-The last line is very good, and ends
the poem well with effective description.
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, Pam. All the best.

Melissa

reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Nov-2018

You are very welcome, Melissa.

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Hi

What a lovely image projected through your poem. I miss waking up to the sound of splashing waves and watching the sun rise.

Great job.
Good luck in the contest
Regards
Tia

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Tia. What a lovely review. I envy your times at the beach.

Melissa

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I adore the last line Melissa and you painting a beautiful picture here and I am wondering if you had any particular beach in mind when you wrote this? That vibrant pink at dawn and the liquid movement is indeed enchanting, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Oh, thank you, Dolly.... no particular one... I love the beach in the morning. It is a great place to be at dawn.

Regards,

Melissa