Lead Detective Case 2 Part 2
Lead Detective hears from the coroner16 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks about two cases relate to kidnapping and missing, investigation is still in progress with some temporary resolution victimization; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This poem speaks about two cases relate to kidnapping and missing, investigation is still in progress with some temporary resolution victimization; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Alcreator for your wonderful review
Comment from Kelly Hanna
What an interesting way to tell a story. I really enjoyed the way this poem read. It had a great beat to it. The story keeps the reader reading and the length was great! The ending worked really well. I would love to read the next! Great job!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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What an interesting way to tell a story. I really enjoyed the way this poem read. It had a great beat to it. The story keeps the reader reading and the length was great! The ending worked really well. I would love to read the next! Great job!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Part
3 will be posted on Sunday, Kelly. Thank you for your interest and wonderful review
Comment from Pantygynt
This is turning ing that ancient form that we see little of these days - the epic poem. I am fascinated by the three fictional detective cases that I am currently following here on FanStory - Tony Fawcus' 'French Letter' Masery's (Bob) 'Shadows of Sin' and this, your 'Lead Detective Case 2'.
Strange really since I read veirtually no crime fiction for pleasure, but I do find these three particularly interesting.
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This is turning ing that ancient form that we see little of these days - the epic poem. I am fascinated by the three fictional detective cases that I am currently following here on FanStory - Tony Fawcus' 'French Letter' Masery's (Bob) 'Shadows of Sin' and this, your 'Lead Detective Case 2'.
Strange really since I read veirtually no crime fiction for pleasure, but I do find these three particularly interesting.
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Hi Jim. I am honored. Thank you for your interest. I have written some crime poems before but not installments. I think you read Lead Detective which presents his first case. His partner was the killer. Thank you for your excellent review
Comment from jenintorre
Good evening Pam,
you have really excelled yourself here. A brilliant peice of crime writing and all in excellent rhyme. Well done. Blessings. Jen. X
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Good evening Pam,
you have really excelled yourself here. A brilliant peice of crime writing and all in excellent rhyme. Well done. Blessings. Jen. X
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Thank you Jen very much for the six star rating. Part 3 next Sunday. Thanks also for the great review
Comment from susand3022
OMG...OMG...OMG!!! Pam when did you start doing THIS!?!?? It's Fabulous! I love it!!! A mystery poem in serial form... how epic! I'm sure that it won't read that way for everyone in the future so I'm one of the lucky ones! Oh, a little glitch in the first part. "Until he is, we'll (not will) never stop."
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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OMG...OMG...OMG!!! Pam when did you start doing THIS!?!?? It's Fabulous! I love it!!! A mystery poem in serial form... how epic! I'm sure that it won't read that way for everyone in the future so I'm one of the lucky ones! Oh, a little glitch in the first part. "Until he is, we'll (not will) never stop."
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Thank you Susan for your delightful review. Part 3 next Sunday. Thank you so much for the extra star
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Can't wait to see it!
Comment from tkbrown
This is almost too powerful. It tells of a serial killer who flaunts the deaths of women kidnapped more than a year before; then promises many more before the year is through - one for every full moon and one also for full moon blue. I think the words and the art that you have chosen from the internet say it all. Thank you for sharing and allowing me to review your work. tkbrown - Treva
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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This is almost too powerful. It tells of a serial killer who flaunts the deaths of women kidnapped more than a year before; then promises many more before the year is through - one for every full moon and one also for full moon blue. I think the words and the art that you have chosen from the internet say it all. Thank you for sharing and allowing me to review your work. tkbrown - Treva
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Thank you Treva for your wonderful words and lovely review. Part 3 next Sunday
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Thank You! I will be here! Treva
