God Omniscient Deeds
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "God Whispers Man Clamours"God Omniscient Deeds
115 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. God does speak to us on a daily basis, actually on a minute by minute bases. We just don't always listen. I'm not sure why. LOL Good luck with the contest.
  |
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. God does speak to us on a daily basis, actually on a minute by minute bases. We just don't always listen. I'm not sure why. LOL Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very interesting work you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and gave the meaning to some of those words which was a great help. Thank you for sharing. Nice imagery. blessings, Teri
|
This is a very well written and very interesting work you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and gave the meaning to some of those words which was a great help. Thank you for sharing. Nice imagery. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-May-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I agree. God always whispers and guides it. But many a time we fail to hear Him, lost in the humdrum of daily life. Then we cry in pain when life getting tough. Once we quieten our brains and let peace and quiet surround us, we can her Him. He is always there to help us. Afterall we ar ehis children. I read with interest your rather unusual style of poetry. Good luck in the contest!
|
I agree. God always whispers and guides it. But many a time we fail to hear Him, lost in the humdrum of daily life. Then we cry in pain when life getting tough. Once we quieten our brains and let peace and quiet surround us, we can her Him. He is always there to help us. Afterall we ar ehis children. I read with interest your rather unusual style of poetry. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 31-May-2021
Comment from Wendy G
That is an interesting poem, which compels one to read it several times to gain a sense of the full intent. I like the image as well, as God does at times use dreams to express His messages and will for His people.
|
That is an interesting poem, which compels one to read it several times to gain a sense of the full intent. I like the image as well, as God does at times use dreams to express His messages and will for His people.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling and powerful--you seamlessly incorporated the requisite words--nothing sounds forced--kudos for rising brilliantly to the challenge! This may be a winner.
|
Startling and powerful--you seamlessly incorporated the requisite words--nothing sounds forced--kudos for rising brilliantly to the challenge! This may be a winner.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is very upliftig and thought-provoking--very moving in its expression of how we have hopes and dreams and we turn to God to strengthen us to make them come true.
|
Your poem is very upliftig and thought-provoking--very moving in its expression of how we have hopes and dreams and we turn to God to strengthen us to make them come true.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A dream comes true after many years, now God whispers
God Whispers Man Clamours
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Interesting and obscure poem about the relationship between God and us. I won't lie, I am not sure what this poem is about.
|
A dream comes true after many years, now God whispers
God Whispers Man Clamours
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Interesting and obscure poem about the relationship between God and us. I won't lie, I am not sure what this poem is about.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from Susan Larson
I love reading your poetry praising God and this one does
not disappoint. I love your line "God whispers to me, 'remember your dream, envision now, see it live here'," God is good!
|
I love reading your poetry praising God and this one does
not disappoint. I love your line "God whispers to me, 'remember your dream, envision now, see it live here'," God is good!
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Your work always praises God so beautifully. It is a joy and a comfort to read and think about. If each day we would live as Godly men and women, our poor Orb might not be so broken and in need of concern.
|
Your work always praises God so beautifully. It is a joy and a comfort to read and think about. If each day we would live as Godly men and women, our poor Orb might not be so broken and in need of concern.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am slightly confused by your message here, but I can tell that your words are well meaning and faithful. Our dreams are often thwarted, but hope gives us a chance to changed direction and improve our lives, love Dolly x
|
I am slightly confused by your message here, but I can tell that your words are well meaning and faithful. Our dreams are often thwarted, but hope gives us a chance to changed direction and improve our lives, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-May-2021
