Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

I loved everything about this poem. The rhyme rolled beautifully and the words sat danced together like long term dancers. Then the message topped the work off nicely. A job well done

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 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018

Thank you for this nice review, I'm always glad to hear from my fellow writers.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

This is great...I think it reminds me of yesteryear when hobos jumped trains...they didn't go as fast as they do now
Well penned
's hope within our hearts.
So here we go, the time is now.
This is where it all starts.
God bless

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

Thank you, I was thinking of the past when I wrote it.I appreciate you taking time to read and review.

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

I can't say enough about this poem. It is so beautifully written and the picture is amazing! Definitely a contender in the contest! Six stars!! Thanks for sharing and good luck!

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

Thank you so much, I'm always glad to hear from talented writers like you. Your opinion means a lot.