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Family secrets can be your worst nightmare.
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royowen
Like most cases at the beginning, it starts out a little complicated, with a major suspect supposedly out of the country, with the DNA pointing in their direction, a snobby mother, and an uncooperative wife. It seems nobody liked him. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : We need you to help (up)...us?
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
Thank you for your lovely review and for catching that mistake. Us does make a lot more sense, lol.
Thank you again for all your help support and friendship. They mean a great deal to me, take care.
reply by royowen on 31-Jul-2018
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