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Star of Fantasy

Different orbits

15 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written one-line poem. The mind have no limits where it will go and that I'd what make it so unique when we discover how to use that unlimited resource..

 Comment Written 20-May-2018


reply by the author on 20-May-2018
    Thank Sandra for your thoughtful review and five star rating
Comment from Kerry Wanstall
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In your insightful one line poem you have expressed a fundamental reality. What a blessing that we have minds that can "orbit the star of fantasy", otherwise the world would have no art, music, poetry and all the other wonderful inspiring things that evolve from our imaginations.

 Comment Written 20-May-2018


reply by the author on 20-May-2018
    Thank you Kerry for your wonderful review and five star rating
Comment from Katya
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I like that! I REALLY like that. That is wonderful compact poetic imagery, and with tons of meaning. It makes this just a wonderful poem. thank you so much for posting ti

 Comment Written 20-May-2018


reply by the author on 20-May-2018
    Thank you Katya for your delightful review and five star rating
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the One Line Poem writing prompt.
Your one line has a strong message.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 20-May-2018


reply by the author on 20-May-2018
    Thank you Sharon for your wonderful review and excellent rating
Comment from meeshu
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hey, that is really good, Pam. well thought and well scribed. and you said you didn't like "little" poems. or maybe that was me..........meeshu

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 Comment Written 20-May-2018


reply by the author on 20-May-2018
    I don?t like little people. That includes me at 4?11?. Lol. Just kidding. I stole this from a larger poem which I have not been able to finish. Thank you for your delightful review and five star rating