Hide and Seek
Playing hide and seek41 total reviews
Comment from Dorinda Palmisano
Wow...haven't you just hit the nail on the head! How innocent we all are at the "get-go". What happens to make us so suspicious...I just watched a documentary on Gary Shandling and he said that it takes such work to truly be yourself, you're never finished. It struck me that that was such a deep, real statement. Much like this poem of yours. Thank you for this wonderful work. Dorinda
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Wow...haven't you just hit the nail on the head! How innocent we all are at the "get-go". What happens to make us so suspicious...I just watched a documentary on Gary Shandling and he said that it takes such work to truly be yourself, you're never finished. It struck me that that was such a deep, real statement. Much like this poem of yours. Thank you for this wonderful work. Dorinda
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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I remember Gary. Thank you, Dorinda for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from ameen786
quite unique and great comparison and so very true; amazing that you were able to reflect upon human characteristic so wonderfully; thanks for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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quite unique and great comparison and so very true; amazing that you were able to reflect upon human characteristic so wonderfully; thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, ameen786 for your nice review and excellent rating
Comment from judiverse
That is a cute photo. Excellent thought in this. Children hide their bodies, thinking they won't be seen. Adults hide their minds. I think people learn to do this fairly early in life. They think it's better to keep their thoughts hidden. Maybe the think others won't appreciate what's on their minds. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is right on the money. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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That is a cute photo. Excellent thought in this. Children hide their bodies, thinking they won't be seen. Adults hide their minds. I think people learn to do this fairly early in life. They think it's better to keep their thoughts hidden. Maybe the think others won't appreciate what's on their minds. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is right on the money. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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You have a good point. Probably best not to allow all of thoughts we think to be uttered. Thank you for your lovely review and excellent rating
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Very cute. And sometimes children cover their eyes and think they are hiding their bodies which is even funnier. But then again, grownups do other silly things. Fun poem with a deep message.
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Lol. Very cute. And sometimes children cover their eyes and think they are hiding their bodies which is even funnier. But then again, grownups do other silly things. Fun poem with a deep message.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, lyenochka for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is a super cute picture. Kids are the funniest things. =} I think you did a great job with the 5-7-5 poem and also shared wise words with us that are all too true. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This is a super cute picture. Kids are the funniest things. =} I think you did a great job with the 5-7-5 poem and also shared wise words with us that are all too true. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Roxanna for the good luck wishes and for your lovely review and excellent rating
Comment from misscookie
I have no more stars to give
This one is a winner
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect mach
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Your words are so true.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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I have no more stars to give
This one is a winner
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect mach
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Your words are so true.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Cookie for your wonderful review and five star rating
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It was my pleasure.
cookie
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You are very welcome.
Cookie
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I enjoyed it. I like the way you contrast the role of hiding between children and adults, it makes you think. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Nice poem, I enjoyed it. I like the way you contrast the role of hiding between children and adults, it makes you think. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Oliver818 for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from karenina
So adorable! So funny how little children think! If they can't see US then they must be invisible! MY son, when he was one, used to run to hide behind the clothesline pole every single time we played Hide and Seek outdoors! He denies it now of course...but how we laughed! Sometimes I think we're think we can hide from our Maker in this way. It doesn't fork for us either....our Father? Who art in Heaven? Ah....he' one to us!
GREAT POEM!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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So adorable! So funny how little children think! If they can't see US then they must be invisible! MY son, when he was one, used to run to hide behind the clothesline pole every single time we played Hide and Seek outdoors! He denies it now of course...but how we laughed! Sometimes I think we're think we can hide from our Maker in this way. It doesn't fork for us either....our Father? Who art in Heaven? Ah....he' one to us!
GREAT POEM!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, karenina for your usual encouraging review and five star rating
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You rock poetess!
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Thank you, fellow rocker
Comment from victor 66
Your poem speaks a great deal of truth. When I think of talking to a young child, I remember them telling me everything they know in about five minutes, and then they quick talking. Not so with adults. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Your poem speaks a great deal of truth. When I think of talking to a young child, I remember them telling me everything they know in about five minutes, and then they quick talking. Not so with adults. Best wishes.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, victor 66 for your lovely review and five star rating
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You are most welcome, Pam.
Comment from Michael Steinert
Hahaha this is great adults need a break too sometimes and this is a perfect 5 7 5 with great artwork to boot!
Thank you and have a great weekend!
Mike
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Hahaha this is great adults need a break too sometimes and this is a perfect 5 7 5 with great artwork to boot!
Thank you and have a great weekend!
Mike
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Mike for your lovely review and five star rating
