A Compilation of Short stories
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Comment from Commando
An "AWESOME' presentation! The grammar of 'A Victim Of Crime' is like a magnet, "It pulled me in at the start, and held my attention until the end. I only took time out--"For breathing!" Please! Keep ink in the inkwell, and your quill a 'leaving your tracks. Best wishes for a win in the contest... And "God bless!"
XX Bill
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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An "AWESOME' presentation! The grammar of 'A Victim Of Crime' is like a magnet, "It pulled me in at the start, and held my attention until the end. I only took time out--"For breathing!" Please! Keep ink in the inkwell, and your quill a 'leaving your tracks. Best wishes for a win in the contest... And "God bless!"
XX Bill
Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Hi Bill, wow, this is a wonderful review. Thank you so much for this wonderful recognition. All best. Ulla:)xx
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Yes, Ma'am! And "All best to you."
xx Bill
Comment from royowen
I rather liked this ambiguous entry in this 50 word contest in which you've cleverly manipulated the word count, I can't quite make up my mind about who committed the homicide, the caller or another, well done Ulla, good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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I rather liked this ambiguous entry in this 50 word contest in which you've cleverly manipulated the word count, I can't quite make up my mind about who committed the homicide, the caller or another, well done Ulla, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much, Roy. I'm glad you liked it.I found it quite a challenge to write. All the best. Ulla:))
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But well dine
Comment from Sasha
Great job wit this Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry. I have actually heard of this happening at the coroner's office. I can't imagine being unconscious and lying on a slab in the morgue. fortunately the doctor realized the person was still alive before beginning the autopsy. This is a great entry and I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest too.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Great job wit this Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry. I have actually heard of this happening at the coroner's office. I can't imagine being unconscious and lying on a slab in the morgue. fortunately the doctor realized the person was still alive before beginning the autopsy. This is a great entry and I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest too.
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Thanks a lot, Sasha, for the great review. Again,I have to appologise for the late respnse. All the best. Ulla:)))
