Dreams are like...
followup to 5/7/5. If dreams57 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
The author was able to define dreams and gave his own perspective on how to describe a dream made meaningful with specific examples in every stanza. Thanks again for an excellent write. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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The author was able to define dreams and gave his own perspective on how to describe a dream made meaningful with specific examples in every stanza. Thanks again for an excellent write. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much, for your super comments and lovely review, blessings, Roy
Comment from nomi338
Beautiful. Especially the way you tied the scriptures in. My new favorite quote goes something like this: A winner never gives up on his dream, while a loser never wakes up. How true is that? Some people spend their entire time dreaming while the answer or solution, that thing of which they dream, slips from their grasp while they remain asleep, dreaming.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Beautiful. Especially the way you tied the scriptures in. My new favorite quote goes something like this: A winner never gives up on his dream, while a loser never wakes up. How true is that? Some people spend their entire time dreaming while the answer or solution, that thing of which they dream, slips from their grasp while they remain asleep, dreaming.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks, for your very wise comments and super review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Angela VA
This reads smoothly and the meter is good. I don't quite get the "sitting on a pole." Ouch. Ha ha! For many of us, we are following a dream by being on Fanstory and using the gifts God gave us. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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This reads smoothly and the meter is good. I don't quite get the "sitting on a pole." Ouch. Ha ha! For many of us, we are following a dream by being on Fanstory and using the gifts God gave us. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank Angela, for your super comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Tootie
This is excellent--it says so much. Very well-written and great presentation. The last two lines really bring it all together well with a very important truth. Thank you so much! I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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This is excellent--it says so much. Very well-written and great presentation. The last two lines really bring it all together well with a very important truth. Thank you so much! I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank Catherine, for your super comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy
Comment from ScarletAffliction
A dream remains confined to thought
a seed locked in a box.
Don't let it die, just grasp that dream --
'cause time's contained in clocks.
Nicely done! Also a very good point you've made in this piece. I love how your work always passes on a pearl of wisdom. Way to go. :)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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A dream remains confined to thought
a seed locked in a box.
Don't let it die, just grasp that dream --
'cause time's contained in clocks.
Nicely done! Also a very good point you've made in this piece. I love how your work always passes on a pearl of wisdom. Way to go. :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks, for your super comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy
Comment from emptypage
This is really quite lovely, Roy. All your work seems to be really nicely done. I think the extra meanings are the most important part for me. I think? I know. I listen to those trees rustling--and
i haven't been outside in months. I know that voice, though. I hear it... it just feels like Greek, lately. But I'm still listening.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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This is really quite lovely, Roy. All your work seems to be really nicely done. I think the extra meanings are the most important part for me. I think? I know. I listen to those trees rustling--and
i haven't been outside in months. I know that voice, though. I hear it... it just feels like Greek, lately. But I'm still listening.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank Marla, for your lovely comments and sensitive review, keep listening, blessings, Roy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Roy!
The melodic phrasing that you have employed in this beautiful offering resonates with this reader. Even though I may have retired last year, I still have dreams; I still have things I wish to accomplish. The last stanza truly speaks to me:
A dream remains confined to thought
a seed locked in a box.
Don't let it die, just grasp that dream --
'cause time's contained in clocks.
Thank you so much for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Hello Roy!
The melodic phrasing that you have employed in this beautiful offering resonates with this reader. Even though I may have retired last year, I still have dreams; I still have things I wish to accomplish. The last stanza truly speaks to me:
A dream remains confined to thought
a seed locked in a box.
Don't let it die, just grasp that dream --
'cause time's contained in clocks.
Thank you so much for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank Diane, for your lovely comments and sensitive review, blessings, Roy
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Before I wrote my book I always said that I wanted to write a book. Then I heard the keep dreaming because that's all it'll ever be. Or stuff along those lines. Why don't we encourage each other to go after their dreams? Why are people so negative about it? When I published my book I wanted to go up to each and every person who was negative and be all like in your face. I didn't but I did think about it. Great job
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Before I wrote my book I always said that I wanted to write a book. Then I heard the keep dreaming because that's all it'll ever be. Or stuff along those lines. Why don't we encourage each other to go after their dreams? Why are people so negative about it? When I published my book I wanted to go up to each and every person who was negative and be all like in your face. I didn't but I did think about it. Great job
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank you, I agree with you, and thanks for your lovely comments and sensitive review, blessings, Roy
Comment from jppoet
Dear Roy, here we have another triumph of your poetic artistry, sculpted in musical metrical cadence amidst the dance of your sweet rhymes.
Congratulations on the accolades accorded to it already. Blessings, john
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Dear Roy, here we have another triumph of your poetic artistry, sculpted in musical metrical cadence amidst the dance of your sweet rhymes.
Congratulations on the accolades accorded to it already. Blessings, john
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank John,, for your super comments and marvellous review, blessings, Roy
Comment from rtobaygo
Good afternoon, Roy
Enjoyed the poem and I'm out of sixes. A tad confused. Do dreams represent faith we must experience various aspects of life to bring the dream to fruition, to realize what faith brings to one who believes in the dream as they do their faith?
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Good afternoon, Roy
Enjoyed the poem and I'm out of sixes. A tad confused. Do dreams represent faith we must experience various aspects of life to bring the dream to fruition, to realize what faith brings to one who believes in the dream as they do their faith?
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank Ray, I think dreams are born of faith being the substance of things hoped for. Thanks for your super comments and epathetic review, blessings, Roy
