The Death of a Post
Sometimes an idea to write about dies suddenly.41 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Innovative and expressive. Good impact with this, the way should be written and I can tell you, felt every impute and injection of pace and reason intended for the reader.
Bravo.
Between Hitchcock and Stephen King for reference.
Jolly good job.
I loved the fact that you used this from Rasmine. Certainly suits the piece.
My best wishes. Great job.
RG
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Innovative and expressive. Good impact with this, the way should be written and I can tell you, felt every impute and injection of pace and reason intended for the reader.
Bravo.
Between Hitchcock and Stephen King for reference.
Jolly good job.
I loved the fact that you used this from Rasmine. Certainly suits the piece.
My best wishes. Great job.
RG
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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I am wowed by this review. Your comments excited me and inspired me to keep writing. This review from a master of the craft, for a novice such as myself, makes me feel that there is a chance of success in reaching my dream. Being respected as a poet is that dream.
You have made my night.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
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You keep writing, Bridget. Most have talent, only to find where it lies.
Best wishes :)
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Thank you friend.
:) Brigitte
Comment from damommy
You, too???? Some people seem to remember to write down their ideas. Not me. I always think I'll remember them. hahaha
I love the rhyming of the alternating lines. Very clever.
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You, too???? Some people seem to remember to write down their ideas. Not me. I always think I'll remember them. hahaha
I love the rhyming of the alternating lines. Very clever.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I now keep a journal by the bed and hope that I can read my scribbles in the morning.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Janet Foor
I have this problem from time to time as well. Keeping a pen and pad by the bed helps - but not always.
Excellent presentation for this idea to write about that dies suddenly.
Fun post.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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I have this problem from time to time as well. Keeping a pen and pad by the bed helps - but not always.
Excellent presentation for this idea to write about that dies suddenly.
Fun post.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I now keep a journal by the bed and hope that I can read my scribbles in the morning.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from wordsfromsue
What a lyrical, Dr Seuss feeling your poem has. :-)
I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who struggles with keeping my mind on the prompt!
Nicely written, great ending to your dilemma piece. :-)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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What a lyrical, Dr Seuss feeling your poem has. :-)
I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who struggles with keeping my mind on the prompt!
Nicely written, great ending to your dilemma piece. :-)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I now keep a journal by the bed and hope that I can read my scribbles in the morning.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Commando
The word is, "AWESOME!" The last time I woke in the middle of the night, with an idea of words to write, the power was off. I felt my way to the oil lamp, struck a match, lit it and yelled, "Oh, my God! I've got the writer's block, should have paid the electricity bill." Been there--done that! A commendable presentation, Brigitte. Keep on writing, my dear friend, the train is coming around the bend. Toot toot! Best wishes and God bless.
xx Bill
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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The word is, "AWESOME!" The last time I woke in the middle of the night, with an idea of words to write, the power was off. I felt my way to the oil lamp, struck a match, lit it and yelled, "Oh, my God! I've got the writer's block, should have paid the electricity bill." Been there--done that! A commendable presentation, Brigitte. Keep on writing, my dear friend, the train is coming around the bend. Toot toot! Best wishes and God bless.
xx Bill
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I now keep a journal by the bed and hope that I can read my scribbles in the morning. Have a great weekend my dear friend. Thank you for the six stars. Blushing, again. My roses sprang back to life after reading this review.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
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Awe, you are beautiful when you blush--or when you don't too!
xx Bill
Comment from mermaids
I have to write ideas down or I will forget them. I like your use of words here that makes your poem unique. "Secrets surface in the brain" is a great line that is so true, secrets do surface in the brain. Excellent use of action words in your poem.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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I have to write ideas down or I will forget them. I like your use of words here that makes your poem unique. "Secrets surface in the brain" is a great line that is so true, secrets do surface in the brain. Excellent use of action words in your poem.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I now keep a journal by the bed and hope that I can read my scribbles in the morning.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Mame
Very unusual verse - you have certainly told it how it is. The writer's block comes to life with rhythm it seems. The art work is certainly fitting along with black screen. Good message here!
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Very unusual verse - you have certainly told it how it is. The writer's block comes to life with rhythm it seems. The art work is certainly fitting along with black screen. Good message here!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review and taking the time to read. I like that you called unusual and take it as a compliment.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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This was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review and taking the time to read.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
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My pleasure Miss Elko.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from estory
This poem had an interesting rhythm with all those interspersed triple repetitions, I haven't heard this used in poetry before. So it is fresh and a bit groundbreaking there. It kind of has a mechanical, measured feel to it, something imposed on experience, interrupting it. the images seem to swirl in between, flashes of cobwebs and quills and valium bottles. There is a dream like quality to it, a surreal abstractionism in which the creative process is murky, ethereal. estory
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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This poem had an interesting rhythm with all those interspersed triple repetitions, I haven't heard this used in poetry before. So it is fresh and a bit groundbreaking there. It kind of has a mechanical, measured feel to it, something imposed on experience, interrupting it. the images seem to swirl in between, flashes of cobwebs and quills and valium bottles. There is a dream like quality to it, a surreal abstractionism in which the creative process is murky, ethereal. estory
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review and taking the time to read. Your comments are taking as compliments. I like unique. This review could well be a poem in itself with some comments left out.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Brigitte, this poem really whizzes along. I know the feeling - trying too hard can make the head buzz. It is a good read and most annoying when the ideas come in the middle of the night - OK if you can get up without disturbing someone else who may be in the bed, LOL. Good read. Regards Dorothy x
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Hi Brigitte, this poem really whizzes along. I know the feeling - trying too hard can make the head buzz. It is a good read and most annoying when the ideas come in the middle of the night - OK if you can get up without disturbing someone else who may be in the bed, LOL. Good read. Regards Dorothy x
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review and taking the time to read.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
