Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about the mermaid and the flower; there is no furore but silence around the sea, perchance an ode to the flower poet and mermaid gives the joy of the songs; I liked.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Thank you for sharing the further adventures of the Flower Poet. I wonder where they will be next? This has a great deal of imagination,

~patty~

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks. Yes, I seem to be stuck on The Flower Poet. Elaine

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Hello dear you're mermaid poem mermaid was while waiting with great scripted measures it flowed well had no grammar issues the theme and imagery were present as well as adjective an object of content moving it along thanks for this doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Beautiful looking mermaids Ti entice the pirate into the arms of the watery deep. Such a sneak she is using another to reep the rewards she seeks into her cavern so deep

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Any thing that has to do with the sirens song has me hooked but I must confess I don't understand this one and the Flower Poet. Please help me

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Just a silly story where the pirate was expecting the mermaid and the flower grabs him instead. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Ooooo, this is a really cool poem you've penned, I really love it. I love magical stories and mermaids. lol This was really good with such a pretty picture to go with it.
~Kerry

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 Comment Written 23-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017

I am so glad you enjoyed this unique tale. Thanks for reading and enjoying. I appreciate your encouraging comments. Elaine

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 23-Oct-2017

Your very welcome:)

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I though this was a lovely poem. I love the story that it tells. This is creative, enjoyable and very unique. Great job.

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 Comment Written 23-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine