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The Eidolon

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Family heinously murdered. The question is by who?

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written chapter. Everything that happens has a cause. When people or children are abused in whatever way there will come a time they will have enough and then take revenge as a final say.

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of Chapter One.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.