Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This lanturne, Heartbroken, for the proper set up and acts as a scolding to he or she who has treated someone poorly in the affairs of the heart. Good use of the form.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks a lot , Bill. It means a lot to me. All best. Ulla:))

Comment from damommy

Excellent

You're getting so good at these kinds of poetry. You say so much in just a few words.

Great 'it' line. 8-)

Keep up the good writing.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thank you so much, Yvonne. How glad I am. Your opinion means so much to me. A hug. Ulla:))

reply by damommy on 27-Aug-2017

Thank you.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Great job with this Lanturne entry. Your syllable count is perfect and the message you convey, while sad, is something I fear many can relate to. I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest. Keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Hi Sasha, thank you so much, and do forgive me to be so late in answering. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Lanturne poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Teri. So glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I think your words and the expression on the painting get your point across vividly. Of course, as I've said many times, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. And, a lanturne, would be something for me to hold in hand, lighting the way through the woods. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Hahaha, Ric, you make me laugh. I don't know much difference either, but schh, don't tell anybody. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for your support. Are you posting soon? All the best. Ulla:))

reply by Ric Myworld on 27-Aug-2017

As you already know, I don't post much. But I guess I need to write a few pieces to at least meet the quota of six stories. Of course, if I enter them in a contest, regular readers never know about them. LOL! Oh, well, thanks for asking, I appreciate your kindness. :-)