Follow the Path
contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This lanture, Follow the Path, seems to allow that for a person to advance in a holy life, it is necessary to persue that course steadfastly. So true. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
This lanture, Follow the Path, seems to allow that for a person to advance in a holy life, it is necessary to persue that course steadfastly. So true. Nice poem.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thanks for the kind words and high rating.
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Comment from donforclearn
This poem is well written. The image of destiny is excellent. A person really hearing their destiny reminds this reader of following one's path. Good Luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
This poem is well written. The image of destiny is excellent. A person really hearing their destiny reminds this reader of following one's path. Good Luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Both are much appreciated.
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Comment from RodG
I believe any religious person on this site will truly love the simplicity of this poem and its emphasis on faith--"following God's voice." I am not sure, however, what your title is trying to convey.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
I believe any religious person on this site will truly love the simplicity of this poem and its emphasis on faith--"following God's voice." I am not sure, however, what your title is trying to convey.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS to you dear poet. What a powerful statement you made and I feel the spiritual overtone as I determine the full meaning in my mind. Seems it has a calling and eternal forever viewpoint. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
SIX STARS to you dear poet. What a powerful statement you made and I feel the spiritual overtone as I determine the full meaning in my mind. Seems it has a calling and eternal forever viewpoint. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the kind words. I am honored by the six star rating.
Joan
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is truly beautiful! In so few words, you tell a story! I am pleased to have come upon this poem. I wish you luck in the contest. So many great entries. Blessings to you my writing friend. Drew
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
This is truly beautiful! In so few words, you tell a story! I am pleased to have come upon this poem. I wish you luck in the contest. So many great entries. Blessings to you my writing friend. Drew
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. I appreciate the good luck wishes.
Joan
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about destiny to the course of living as it is destined per God's wish and to continue the state of living as per God's voice to the destination; now and forever; I liked.
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
This speaks about destiny to the course of living as it is destined per God's wish and to continue the state of living as per God's voice to the destination; now and forever; I liked.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you.
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very good Lanturne poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
This is a very good Lanturne poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thanks for taking the time tor read and review and for the good luck wishes.
Joan