Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "haiku (cherry blossoms)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from Hitcher
Guilt free you say... YEA it's all fun and games until someone, normally me! Has to rake them up, ha ,ha : ) A Very nice haiku for the tree chapter of the book Gypsy : )
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Guilt free you say... YEA it's all fun and games until someone, normally me! Has to rake them up, ha ,ha : ) A Very nice haiku for the tree chapter of the book Gypsy : )
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. The cherry tree blossoms are the most beautif color of all n
Blossoms. When they fall and scatter all over wothout feeling any guilt
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A very well-written haiku. The cherry tree blossoms are the most beautif color of all n
Blossoms. When they fall and scatter all over wothout feeling any guilt
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sis Cat
Gypsy, this is a superb and vivid Haiku that paints a picture of scattered cherry blossoms. Your satori "guilt free" suggests the cherry tree is unashamed of the mess.
Thank you for sharing your descriptive tree Haiku.
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Gypsy, this is a superb and vivid Haiku that paints a picture of scattered cherry blossoms. Your satori "guilt free" suggests the cherry tree is unashamed of the mess.
Thank you for sharing your descriptive tree Haiku.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
What a wonderful picture you have found. It goes very well with your beautiful poem. Using black has worked very well too. You are great
at writing things.
Kat
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Hi Gypsy,
What a wonderful picture you have found. It goes very well with your beautiful poem. Using black has worked very well too. You are great
at writing things.
Kat
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend.
Gypsy hugs
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You're very welcome. Kat
Comment from susan18
What beautiful imagery!
Reminds me of visiting Washington D.C. many years ago.
Your words made me feel the petals softly dropping to the ground...their freedom in doing what nature intended.
This poem gave me a lovely, calm feeling.
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What beautiful imagery!
Reminds me of visiting Washington D.C. many years ago.
Your words made me feel the petals softly dropping to the ground...their freedom in doing what nature intended.
This poem gave me a lovely, calm feeling.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Gypsy
You haiku about cherry blossoms feeling quilt free Are you saying 'cause the cherry tree will bear one of the most tasty fruits?
Gert
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Hello Gypsy
You haiku about cherry blossoms feeling quilt free Are you saying 'cause the cherry tree will bear one of the most tasty fruits?
Gert
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend.
Guilty free to make a mess.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome Gypsy
Gert
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Gypsy,
The build up is fantastic and the execution sublime.
You are a true artist in the world of the Haiku, and I read them with such pleasure and just a tadge of envy.
Beautiful
Mitchell
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Hi Gypsy,
The build up is fantastic and the execution sublime.
You are a true artist in the world of the Haiku, and I read them with such pleasure and just a tadge of envy.
Beautiful
Mitchell
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
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thank you very much :)
gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Ahhhhh, Gitana, you know this is so close to my heart. Being surrounded by my cherry trees and picking them every year in May. A wonderful haiku. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
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Ahhhhh, Gitana, you know this is so close to my heart. Being surrounded by my cherry trees and picking them every year in May. A wonderful haiku. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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hola, Ulla, gracias guapa :)
