Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

"Here we 'round in circles. Gonna fly high like the birds up in the sky-y-y." Thanks for sharing your cute, little, dialogue only story. I think I get the beak of it. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Ric. Ulla:))

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This reminded of too many conversations with my ex-husband. We would go around in circles and never get past the first sentence. Very nice work with this and afun entry for this contest. I sincerely wish you all the best too.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, I know what you mean, So sorry fot the late answer. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from damommy

Excellent

This was fun to read. I could hear them as I read.

I hate those conversations. They never go anywhere.

Good luck in the contest. 8-)

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Yvonne.I'm so sorry for the late review. Ulla:)))

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

Yes, this sounds authentic,Ulla. A very typical conversation between two people who just grate on each other sometimes. I thought the interchange was well written out, believable. My very best wishes for the competition, my friend, Giddy xs

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Giddy. thank you so much. This answer is far too late. I'm sorry. Hugs. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Oh, Ulla, I wish I had a six left, this is probably the best dialogue entry I've read, in fact it is! It is so funny, I loved it. It reads just like a couple of old dears having a go at each other and your picture makes it even funnier. I do hope you get some 6s for this, my friend, you will get my vote! Exceptional! xxxxxxxxx Sandra

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Oh, Sandra, I feel so guilty I'm so late in answering. I don't know what happened. Thanks a lot for your virtual six. Hugs. Ulla xxxx

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hola Ulla,

hahaha.... this dialogue is funny. You did a great job and I am sure you will do well in the contest. I hate when people do that kind of thing. Good job, honey. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017

Thank you so much, my friend. So happy you liked it. Ulla :)xx

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Well, this was fun. Short - I like that though as all dialog gets hard to read if it goes on and on. My only suggestion would be quotation marks but they don't show them in the example so you don't need them I guess.

Good luck in the contest.

teresa

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017

Hi Teresa, so glad you liked it. Quotation marks are not allowed in the contest, hence they are not there. Thanks so much again. All the bst. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Great dialogue reminded me of the dialogue only scripts I studied in an acting class in which the actors determine through their performance what is being debated. Effective use of conflict and circular argument:

Yeah, I will, but that brings us back right to start, doesn't it? What was it you were saying?

Christ, we're going round in circles!

Looks like it.

Your voices show two distinct characters--exasperated and offended.

Thank you for sharing and I wish you contest success.

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Andre, and sorry I'm so terribly late in answering. All the best, Ulla:))

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

LOL I have had conversations that is very similar, especially with certain people. I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck with it.

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Thanks alt, Barbara. I'm sorry, I'm so late in answering. All the best. Ulla:)))