Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

It's nice to see Jax back and all of you loyal picture-challenge people doing your part to put smiles on all our faces. What a great picture and poem combination that show love is in the air, every where. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thanks much I have been a little inconsistent with this lately.

Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear frogbook, Cute picture, and the colors of the background and text fitted in perfectly with your poem. I'd love to get away from it all the way they escaped from the zoo - sometimes it seems to me that my life is like a zoo! Good rhyming quatrains. Dove

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thanks so much.

Comment from MaggieF

Excellent

Have read quite a few about this picture, it's surprising how diverse they are. I love your poem, its upbeat with good rhythm and rhyme. Good alliteration and great imagery. I loved the last line, I'm a sucker for happy endings. MaggieF

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thanks, I need to get on the ball and read some more of them myself! It is quite fun to see the different takes.

Comment from 1newpoet

Excellent

I love how you made this poem about a fantasy escape. I wrote a similar one called "To The Moon" so happy to see that there are still people who write fun poems such as this.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

I have to get around to reading the rest. Have been in a bit of a hurry lately.

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello there friend I really enjoyed reading this poem about the orangutan I like the structure and flow throughout I also like the rhyming schemes this is very cute and cleverly written thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thanks for your very pleasant review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This s a fun poem that takes our primate my the zoo to the freedom and carefree life in the Caribbean. I wonder who she went with to that tropical retreat?

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thanks so much for reading Bill. Much appreciated.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL! I can just imagine that, the orangutan and his mate swaning off to their own private beach! LOL. Well done, JoAnn, it's a lovely take on the picture. Every one's is so different. big hugs. Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thanks much, my friend.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing your take on the 'picture this' challenge. Wouldn't it be lovely if the poor trapped animals could escape the zoo and go on holiday? Thank you for the smiles,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Sounded like a good time, I wanted to go with-haha. Thanks for reading.