Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Indeed they do and it is so fun to watch them. I love the satori - it has just a hint of humor in it.

Great haiku Karyn:)

teresa

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you for your kind review and comments for my spring haiku, Teresa. I'm delighted you enjoyed the satori.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku.an early morning gathering on.the lawn by the Robins leads to an excellent party chattering and tweeting the whole morning while preparing breakfast.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

I keep a lookout for robins, a sure sign of spring. Thank you for your kind review and comments for my spring haiku, Sandra. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Thanks for the wonderful little poem and tribute. I think everyone likes Robins. What wild creature is more accessible to our eyes and ears, as close to us and everyone in the world, as this beautiful bird?
Bill~

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

I love robins, Bill. I keep a lookout for them, a sure sign of spring. Thank you for your kind review and comments for my spring haiku. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your great response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

LOL! The picture in my mind as I read your words was of robins feasting like they were at a barbecue. Upon reading your author's notes, I was surprised at how closely mirrored our thoughts were. Thank you for sharing this well penned haiku.
~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

I love to watch robins, Patty, and I keep a lookout for them, a sure sign of spring for me. Thank you for your kind review and comments for my spring haiku. I'm delighted we shared the same thoughts.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Just wonderful, as usual. You write the absolute BEST haiku! Your last lines, satori, are always so clever! 'lawn party'...of course!! Blessings...

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for your encouraging comments, Irish Rain. I truly appreciate your kind review, and I'm pleased you enjoyed my spring haiku. Thank you for your compliments...I'm so honored.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is lovely. I always think of the birds when Spring arrives. I also love the image of the birds having a lawn party. You create a scene of nature that makes the reader feel good.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

I love robins, mermaids, and I keep a lookout for them, a sure sign of spring. Thank you for your kind review and comments for my spring haiku. I'm delighted you enjoyed the satori.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Very nice. Strong clear imagery in your first two lines. A great aha moment in your satori. A great observation in nature. I really like this one, my friend

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you, Douglas, for your encouraging response to my spring haiku. I'm pleased you mentioned the imagery and that you liked the satori. Robins are a sure sign of spring to me, and I get so excited when I spot the first one. Their song is so happy, and makes me happy to hear them. Thanks!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Karyn,

You should know that any poem that features robins is going to be a hit with me! *smile* But, for real, I can truly see this one - all those birdies gathered around some goodies in the yard! Yummy! Thanks!

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

LOL! Thanks for liking my robins, Robyn. Thanks for your review nd comments for my spring haiku. Glad you could easily envision the scene.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Donya Quijote

Excellent

Beautiful. A perfect haiku in my opinion. The only suggestion I have would be to swap out lawn for garden. I learned in my travels to Europe that the words are similar in meaning. For me garden has an elegance that lawn does not. Anyway, I wouldn't change a thing. Just a thought and nothing more as I am just waking up...

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Thanks for your kind review and comments for my spring haiku, Donya. I appreciate your feedback. I used lawn instead of Garden because they are on the lawn. There's nothing in the garden right now except autumn leaves and dead flowers that will need cleaning soon. I think they like the grass with the morning dew because the worms seem to be closer to the surface. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi friend , it is great to observe the birds in the morning ,pecking at the nuts. Blackbirds sparrows, robins pigeons are all there partying. It is a great sight.
Well done.
Danny Jock

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Thank you for your kind review and comments for my spring haiku, Danny Jock. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)