Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine haiku for the contest
with exact 5-7-5 syllables to the old form
Excellent visual imagery in the orb/hues
with good grammatical connection in present tense
and a solid satori line reflecting on the scene
Excellent picture to match poem
Nicely done
Best wishes in the contest

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017

Thanks for reading and the accolade -much appreciated zanya

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

What a beautiful picture you painted with your words! The skies during sunset are just breathtaking, just like your poem. The imagery is rich and vivid. This is a true haiku. Thank you for the images. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017

A wonderful accolade for this little poem- thanks for taking time to read zanya

Comment from suep

Excellent

Good imagery and you meet the syllable requirements. I enjoyed the alliteration with the 's'. I like the phrase 'sinks in sky'. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. :)

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017

And thanks for reading and the critique zanya

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A very good example of Haiku. This one actually says something. Most of it leaves me scratching my head trying to figure out what the author is saying.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017

I enjoyed reading this review - frank and to the point! Thanks for the critique zanya