Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, deb. You have been away so long I lost track of your story to be honest with you. I am attempting to catch on again if possible. One thing is for sure, the plot is action packed and your dialogue is superb between the characters. Blessings, my friend. good to see you back. Bob

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016

Hi Bob,

It has been a while. Thanks for the encouraging comments and for trying to catch up. Thanks for the welcome back.
Debi

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

I had forgotten all about this story Debi.
Summestorm was saved by the crowd.
Piper plays better than most masters. Such talent is rare in one so young."Is Summerstorm trying to exploit his talent? What is his interest? Well done Debi. Nancy
grab Summe[r]storm's arm. (one spag)

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016

Hi Nancy,

I know, I haven't posted since May. Life threw me a few curves. I am so happy that you remembered this story, especially since it has been so long. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.

Debi

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I have to say I was wondering what had happened to this story. Glad to see it back. Well written instalment... hopefully many more to come.

I'll have plenty of time to get ready." - need opening speech marks here.

"Disguise?" I am just dressed for the evening." - delete the speech marks after the question mark.

All the best
G

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016

Hi G,

Thank you for the encouraging words. It has been since May since I've posted, but life threw me a few curves that had to be taken care of. I did keep writing, but had no time to post.

Thanks for pointing out the corrections needed. I appreciate you taking the time and that you remembered the story.

I've dropped by occasionally in the last six months to see if you had continued the Sinbad story or the Outer space one, but I didn't see any additions.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Captain Burkehart is trying to protect Piper from fair folk, or faes, in this case Summerstorm who wants to get his hooks into the young musician then the crowd mistake Summerstorm, for Braun a musician the like, and spirit him away, as he smirks back at Burkehart. Nicely measured story, with great characters, well done, excellent writing, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016

Hi royowen,
Thank you for your summary and the wonderful comments about the story and characters. I appreciate the encouragement.
Debi

reply by royowen on 08-Dec-2016

Most welcome

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written chapter. Your chapter flowed from beginning to end easily. The chapter moved right along. Your added detail and realistic characters brought the story to life for me as I read it. Well done.

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016

Hi winnona,

Thank you for the encouraging review. I appreciate the comments about it flowing well and am pleased to know you enjoyed the details and the realistic characters. You made my day with you review. Thank you so much for stopping by and taking the time.

Debi

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Another great story, as usual. You have good use of dialog and a flow that is easy to follow. Dialog makes the reader feel a part of the story.

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 Comment Written 06-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Hi Thomas Bowling,
Thank you for the encouraging comments about the writing style, dialog and the characters. I am happy to hear you found it effective and easy to follow. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Debi