Comment from RodG

Excellent

Oh, does this bring back a flood of memories about those bygone days in Middle School.
Good description of her any why she drew your fancy.
I wish you had not included the last three lines as they totally change the tone of your sweet reminiscing. But that's the romantic in me speaking, wanting only a happy ending.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

Life does move on. Thanks for the read. I guess you are a romantic.

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Okay , I am in love with you now. What a sweet wonderful recollection of the innocence of youth and life. I absolutely love it. Don't change anything. Sorry I do not have a six. Judy

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 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

Thanks for the read and the comment. Love is wonderful isn't it?

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

I've read a few of these and I really like this one. The picture is wonderful. The last line is terrific, I love seeping! I wish I had a six for you.

Good luck in the contest.
Have a great Thanksgiving and God bless.
mike

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 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

Thanks for the read and the comment. A wonderful Thanksgiving to you.