An Ode to Copulation
Purists take notice! As an ode, you'll find this odious.26 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
A great read, thanks for a funny ride. The bible says the 'marriage bed is undefiled' ie whatever a couple want to do for each other's enjoyment in the bonds of marriage is ok in God's eyes. No spags and a real enjoyment to read.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2016
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A great read, thanks for a funny ride. The bible says the 'marriage bed is undefiled' ie whatever a couple want to do for each other's enjoyment in the bonds of marriage is ok in God's eyes. No spags and a real enjoyment to read.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your very appreciated and insightful review, Sankey! (I didn't think God would object to my thinking or words.)
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I rthin k this is a competition would like to share a story I wrote about the results of original sin as specifically concerns women from Menopause and so on if interested. Let me know. Yes and I am a bloke ok.
Comment from Grasshopper2
UPDATE: CONGRATULATIONS ON WINNING. My 12 votes put you over the top. Oh, wait, that's for the presidential election. My favorite lines are: "one can't produce what everyone favors. (that's why there's jello in so many flavors)." And, I did not find it odious and did enjoy the reading, especially your use of words often not used. Good luck in the contest - YOU WON!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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UPDATE: CONGRATULATIONS ON WINNING. My 12 votes put you over the top. Oh, wait, that's for the presidential election. My favorite lines are: "one can't produce what everyone favors. (that's why there's jello in so many flavors)." And, I did not find it odious and did enjoy the reading, especially your use of words often not used. Good luck in the contest - YOU WON!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Thank you, Michael! I appreciate your glowing comments more than you can know!
Comment from winnona
A well- written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of this contest very well. Your well-chosen words flowed line to line and combined forming the message of the poem for the reader.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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A well- written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of this contest very well. Your well-chosen words flowed line to line and combined forming the message of the poem for the reader.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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THank you for your positive review, Winnona.
Comment from oliver818
This is a smart, witty, humourous and enjoyable poem! I like the flow and the word play. Thanks for sharing,good luck with the competition and have a great day
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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This is a smart, witty, humourous and enjoyable poem! I like the flow and the word play. Thanks for sharing,good luck with the competition and have a great day
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Thanks for your compliments, Oliver! I'm glad you enjoyed Copulation!
Comment from Alex Rosel
I like the slant you've adopted for this ode -- that of informing the reader that your work may be misleading or incorrect, but in any case flippant :-) It's a fun piece that brought a smile to my face. Good luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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I like the slant you've adopted for this ode -- that of informing the reader that your work may be misleading or incorrect, but in any case flippant :-) It's a fun piece that brought a smile to my face. Good luck with the competition.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Thanks for your complimentary review, Alex!. Much appreciated!
Comment from tfawcus
This stands alone in my estimation for the splendid invention of 'coplulationship'. As one would expect in a poem extolling the probing of internal parts for pleasure, it tittilates with copious internal rhyme. One can really only conclude a review of a piece such as this with a hearty ejaculation: "Bravo!"
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
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This stands alone in my estimation for the splendid invention of 'coplulationship'. As one would expect in a poem extolling the probing of internal parts for pleasure, it tittilates with copious internal rhyme. One can really only conclude a review of a piece such as this with a hearty ejaculation: "Bravo!"
Comment Written 12-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
Tony, thank you so much for your profoundly poetic praise of my possibly passably, proficient piece!
However, you must accept full credit for the authorship of "copulationship." I humbly admit, though, to "impregnationship."
As much as I appreciate your plenteous plaudits, perhaps it would have been politic had you held your ejaculation until my "Copulation " climaxed (as authorship is not disclosed in this contest, why do you assume 'bravo!," not "brava!" was the appropriate exclamation? (Sexist?) ;) :oD!
Sorry, Tony, I couldn't resist!
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Oh dear! I am profoundly embarrassed by my false entry and shall make both a hasty withdrawal and retraction. I remain in awe of your bravura and bravado. You leave me limp with shame!
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Only joshing. By all means (or any means) do not withdraw!
Comment from Nika2016
I loved it...humorous..witty
historical....Biblical...
Philosophical...
My favorite lines...abstainers.
Ambivalents ...jello in flavors...
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
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I loved it...humorous..witty
historical....Biblical...
Philosophical...
My favorite lines...abstainers.
Ambivalents ...jello in flavors...
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
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There's no better comment than "I loved it!" Thanks for the terrific review. I loved it, Nika!
Comment from crybry67
Very clever, you did a wonderful job (and you're right, needs no illustration). The flow was great, good rhyme . Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Very clever, you did a wonderful job (and you're right, needs no illustration). The flow was great, good rhyme . Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Thank you for the compliments, crybry! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem on copulation (and filling in the visuals with your own). Good luck with your writing!
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Your words are expressive. Thanks for sharing this piece and good luck in the contest. The only other comment I have is copulation at its spiritual best is so much more than physical coupling.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill~
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Your words are expressive. Thanks for sharing this piece and good luck in the contest. The only other comment I have is copulation at its spiritual best is so much more than physical coupling.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill~
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Hmm. Isn't copulation, when at its spiritual best, physical coupling? Well, enjoy anyhow, while working on that one! Thanks for your complimentary review, Bill!
Comment from Reedblitzerman
I almost didn't write a review and then I decided, "Screw it!" You take some light hearted and enjoyable digressions. It certainly is free verse and I enjoyed your approach immensely. You touched just a bit on religion, impregnation, fun, and a bit of history. Quite an accomplishment for such a short ditty.
[obviously, it's intentionally specious, and equally clearly, it's facetious.] excellent use of language here, where I'm biased as I love the word "facetious".
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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I almost didn't write a review and then I decided, "Screw it!" You take some light hearted and enjoyable digressions. It certainly is free verse and I enjoyed your approach immensely. You touched just a bit on religion, impregnation, fun, and a bit of history. Quite an accomplishment for such a short ditty.
[obviously, it's intentionally specious, and equally clearly, it's facetious.] excellent use of language here, where I'm biased as I love the word "facetious".
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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I'm glad you had a good read, Reed! And that you decided to screw it. You enjoyed it, and there was no harm done. (I thought I'd be facetious for you.) Thanks for your insightful review!
