Comment from candyfink

Excellent

I thought it was well written .......... and I thought it captured the spirit of teens during that period .... it was presented well..................

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016

I think I watched Mitchum in Thunder Road four or five times during my late teens...we were so young in many ways, back then, but more mature than today's kids in others. That writing diary style with no dialog or paragraphs is not my favorite method. Thanks for reading and reviewing my potlatch challenge entry.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I enjoyed this writing in the character of the young man who was an opportunist to say the least, taking 'advantage' of an older woman and becoming a bootleggers transport. Well done, this is a well written and most absorbing story about a young man who was about as intelligent as I was at the same age, brilliantly written Red, what had to Sinbad and Badsin? Well done, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016

Some boys, in those days, despite decent upbringing, had the wrong heroes. I felt handicapped by the diary effect, but that was the challenge. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing, Roy.

reply by royowen on 12-Jun-2016

Well done Red