It's All In a Name
200 word min, dialogue=Potlatch Challenge28 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
I started to ask if Mary's you're girl was a typo, but with Kardassians involved, I guess not...looks like a very valid entry for the dialog challenge.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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I started to ask if Mary's you're girl was a typo, but with Kardassians involved, I guess not...looks like a very valid entry for the dialog challenge.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Oh, good catch. Fixed.
This came out okay considering I truly dashed it off. I ran home not sure if Gman was coming through with the topic. So a truly off the top of my head effort. These are fun. I loved some of these. Yours was a kick, really different. mikey
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
LOL I love it! Who? What?
Isn't that awkward? Of course, that never happens to me but I had met people out in the street and they say hello and I remembered their faces but I have no clue who they are or why they know me.
Thank God I never played patty cake with a stranger that I didn't even know his name.
You kept the dialog moving right along at a good pace and it was hilarious. But that is nothing new.
Who is on first?
Did you read my dialogue? I wrote it for you. I didn't dedicated to you but I wrote it because you asked me. It was fun. Thank you
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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LOL I love it! Who? What?
Isn't that awkward? Of course, that never happens to me but I had met people out in the street and they say hello and I remembered their faces but I have no clue who they are or why they know me.
Thank God I never played patty cake with a stranger that I didn't even know his name.
You kept the dialog moving right along at a good pace and it was hilarious. But that is nothing new.
Who is on first?
Did you read my dialogue? I wrote it for you. I didn't dedicated to you but I wrote it because you asked me. It was fun. Thank you
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Patty cake. LOL Love it.
Yes, I read it more than once. I have to get organized and review the things I've read. I read it and made a link for it and everything. Excellent. It was great, Wizdick Dive, yes? HAHAHA! Okay, getting caught up and then I'll be a model citizen. Irish Hugs, mikey
Comment from l.raven
OMG Michael, you are toooooo funny...but I have done that before...in my 20's I went out with a guy to make my boyfriend jealous...and I called him my boyfriends name...I felt awful...LOL...now who is Linda ????...LOL...this is a great story told you...so in love...very well written...luff ya sweetie...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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OMG Michael, you are toooooo funny...but I have done that before...in my 20's I went out with a guy to make my boyfriend jealous...and I called him my boyfriends name...I felt awful...LOL...now who is Linda ????...LOL...this is a great story told you...so in love...very well written...luff ya sweetie...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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You're Linda! The whole jealousy thing's a bad idea. HAHAHA! The last girl who tried that with me I saw to it she ended up married to the dude. LOL I remember I was writing a Novel with Linda in it, and I couldn't kill her off. HAAAAAAA!!! She ended up being a major hero. Don't want to upset the Sweetness. :)) mikey
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LMAO...you...I would never have married the guy...but I felt bad calling him someone else...LOL...your to cute...and always so welcome...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Linda Engel
Pick a partner, any partner. This was a gem for sure. Love the dialog and keep them guessing who's on top. Leave it up to you to present something fun and sporting that ends up in the bedroom.
Good one..."your Linda" hee hee
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Pick a partner, any partner. This was a gem for sure. Love the dialog and keep them guessing who's on top. Leave it up to you to present something fun and sporting that ends up in the bedroom.
Good one..."your Linda" hee hee
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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I knew I'd find "My Linda" if I was patient. I've missed you. I didn't know you were a writer too. Small world. LOL
It's funny, but you're right, I do lean towards these themes when I'm writing with a fast deadline. HAHAHA! I'm glad I finally found you. I guess I'll have to renew my membership for sure now! mikey
Comment from Liberty Justice
Five stars 5. Poet, this story is so cute and funny. Seems like people get so drunk that they don't even know each other's name. Forgetfulness can certainly bring on jealousy and distrust. SO CUTE! Check mine out, too, dear poet. liberty justice
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Five stars 5. Poet, this story is so cute and funny. Seems like people get so drunk that they don't even know each other's name. Forgetfulness can certainly bring on jealousy and distrust. SO CUTE! Check mine out, too, dear poet. liberty justice
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Stopped by for one of yours today. I'll be back for more.
I've been so drunk I didn't know my own name. By then it didn't really matter. HAHAHA! mikey
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No, that's not who you are
dear friend! liberty justice
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Yeah, just kidding. LOL
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH hun you have to get your meds changed. No, wait, maybe i have to get mine changed, let me reread it.
Cute piece, different, and it reminds me of the joke about waking up the morning after a big drunk and finding you have a spouse.lol
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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OH hun you have to get your meds changed. No, wait, maybe i have to get mine changed, let me reread it.
Cute piece, different, and it reminds me of the joke about waking up the morning after a big drunk and finding you have a spouse.lol
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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That happens to me all the time. Sometimes it's even MY spouse. Go figure. HAHAHAHA!! Too funny, MY spouse, Get it? LOL mikey
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that's why I love you dear friend
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Mikey
= Oh, this dude is a name-dodger of the highest order.
= Great name game write.
= Challenge well met.
(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Hi, Mikey
= Oh, this dude is a name-dodger of the highest order.
= Great name game write.
= Challenge well met.
(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Whew. This was the fastest I've ever written anything. No thoughts in my head at all, I had to be somewhere so I literally just started typing, called up advanced editor, pasted, found a picture, pressed end preview and took off. I'm so delighted it's actually pretty good. Amazing. LOL mikey
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Mikey,
this is so cute. What a great funny read, you had me laughing from beginning to end.
Your imagination and ability to get down in writing is so clever.
You necer fail to make laugh.
Great read.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Hi Mikey,
this is so cute. What a great funny read, you had me laughing from beginning to end.
Your imagination and ability to get down in writing is so clever.
You necer fail to make laugh.
Great read.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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I'm so pleased. I wrote this in a huge hurry. I liked yours quite a bit too. You're picking up prose as fast as you do everything else. I bet I could teach you piano in a week. LOL mikey
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Hi Mikey,
Thanks for reading mine but you forgot to leave a review. lol Not many people reviewing this week on the prose. I have been writing my book chapters and got behind a bit. Have just put one up for Pa's birthday. Must sort out those dollars I owe you for promoting my sonnet. Third place, I wish I had voted for myself now I would have been third place on my own, but I ain't complaining.
Not much happening on here lately where have they all gone?!!!!
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You don't owe me anything. Well, undying love and devotion, but no fake money or anything. I'm planning on reviewing the prose pieces today. I'm just way behind on everything. Lots of late entries, so maybe some reviews on the way. Yeah, kind of slow. Just a lull I think.
No one has ever done what you did. Come in here knowing nothing and ended up placing in a Crown contest in less than six months. Amazing. You beat out some real pros. :))
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You already have my undying love and devotion, Mikey.x I guess trying to do the list after the challenge takes up your time, sorry shouldn't be so impatient. I will await feed back. seems not everyone is to keen on reviewing. loL
Thanks hun x
Brenda:))x
Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL! Now this is fun dialog. But of course, for me, it's a little too reminding of some of my own blunders along the way. I called my second wife by my first wife's name right during the crescendo to climax. I must say that the squeals building toward ecstasy cooled off rather quickly, the tongue's slip never forgotten. I mean, slip of the tongue. Oh, well, you understand what I'm trying to say. Thanks for another fine read. :-)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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LOL! Now this is fun dialog. But of course, for me, it's a little too reminding of some of my own blunders along the way. I called my second wife by my first wife's name right during the crescendo to climax. I must say that the squeals building toward ecstasy cooled off rather quickly, the tongue's slip never forgotten. I mean, slip of the tongue. Oh, well, you understand what I'm trying to say. Thanks for another fine read. :-)
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Yes, I understand. LOL
I'm lucky, they're all named "Darlin". I don't care what name they call me or if they sing Row, Row, Row your Boat as long as they're with me, it's all good. mikey
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! You do it every time, write such a funny one, I laugh my socks off. I have done that, called my husband another name, my late husbands, but it still makes me feel guilty, lol, don't know why. I loved it, you did this potlatch really well. xxx Sandra
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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LOL! You do it every time, write such a funny one, I laugh my socks off. I have done that, called my husband another name, my late husbands, but it still makes me feel guilty, lol, don't know why. I loved it, you did this potlatch really well. xxx Sandra
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Should I let you in on the secret? It doesn't bother us at all. It makes us happy that you're with us and actually naming someone we have defeated in our quest for your affections. However, we don't pass up the opportunity to use your guilt to acquire exciting services to ease your pain. We're swell like that. LOL mikey
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LOL!!!! You are so funny. That's the last time I feel guilty! :)))