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Comment from AnnaLinda
Teri,
You have a very excellent Quinzaine poem/entry here.
I looked at the requirements for the contest and it
appears you have it right:)
I like how you present your faith
and make a strong statement while doing it.
Your presentation is also lovely.
Linda
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
Teri,
You have a very excellent Quinzaine poem/entry here.
I looked at the requirements for the contest and it
appears you have it right:)
I like how you present your faith
and make a strong statement while doing it.
Your presentation is also lovely.
Linda
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri
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I see you changed the last line...I must not have been awake when I reviewed this...lol Sorry I did not catch that you needed that 2nd question. I did look at the contest requirements too?
I liked your last statement so much...
Oh well, good luck.
Linda
Comment from William Ross
This is nice but does not fit a quinzaine, this should have 2 questions after the first line yes I am on the last line is not a question, If changes are made to fit the prompt and style I can review again.
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
This is nice but does not fit a quinzaine, this should have 2 questions after the first line yes I am on the last line is not a question, If changes are made to fit the prompt and style I can review again.
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Thank you my friend. I did fix that. have a blessed day. Teri
Comment from patcelaw
Teri, the greatest blessing we can have is to know Jesus as our Savior and know we shall see Him in Heaven. I will be seeing you there too, Teri. Blessings for a great Lord's day. Patricia
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
Teri, the greatest blessing we can have is to know Jesus as our Savior and know we shall see Him in Heaven. I will be seeing you there too, Teri. Blessings for a great Lord's day. Patricia
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Thank you my friend. Wont that be a great time! hugs, Teri