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Comment from Douglas Paul
This is a clever and creative poem, Bill. I like the rhyme pattern you used and the rhymes feel natural and unforced. You tell a fun tale in this one
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reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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This is a clever and creative poem, Bill. I like the rhyme pattern you used and the rhymes feel natural and unforced. You tell a fun tale in this one
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Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Thank you, Douglas, for the excellent review. Bill
