Comment from Taffspride

Excellent

Very well penned Roy, and I wish you much fun in your holidays.


What fun you will have with your rellies on these glorious shores, and think you'll not need wellies where you are going.

I loved this line.
These islands cluster, form one land,

Paradise for sure.

Truly I am envious, but will look forward to reading about your trip when you return.

Thanks for sharing, and enjoy!!!

Iechyd da

Ann

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thanks Ann, for these most gracious words and a super review, blessings, Roy

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the photo is that where your at.
If so God bless and enjoy all you can
like you said you worked hard for this
I would always tell my friends, Don't send me not card saying you miss me... you know It's a lie.
God bless and stay safe.
Cookie

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thanks Cookie, for these most gracious words and a super review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Dustybones

Excellent

Such a great and fun poem you have written about your upcoming trip. Have a good time. Keep writing and let us know of all the fun you're having . Let the good times roll. Enjoying life is what God wants us to do.

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thanks for these most gracious words and a super review, blessings, Roy

Comment from LisaD123

Excellent

This is a very entertaining poem and the imagery is very powerful. The rhyme creates a sense of fun and the imagery is evocative of the enjoyment of being in Bali.It skillfully recreates the excitement we feel before we go on holiday. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thanks again Lisa for this lovely review and wishes, blessings, Roy

Comment from Galactia

Exceptional

Hi

I really enjoyed your poem of your family trip to bali. Lucky soul. I'm jelous :) i hope you and your family enjoy yourself.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thanks Tia, for these most lovely words and a marvellous review, and the lovely stars, blessings, Roy

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I went there and, even though it was a stop over flight, I loved the heat and the people. I hope you have a great holiday and come home really tanned lol. Great poem and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thanks again for the lovely, gracious words and best wishes, blessings, Roy.

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

I found this to be a nice rhyming poem about going on holiday to Bali. It held me to the end and left me with good images.

Internet access can be dodgy in some of these places and I think that is what you are saying. This is on our list of places to go. We just missed a combined cruise with a five day stay in Bali over last Christmas. It was discounted too. We were/are sick as the proverbial. lol.

Good poem... ~Mel~

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thanks for these most marvellous, words and a super review, and really bad luck on missing out on the cruise and Bali visit, blessings, Roy

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Roy.

Hahahaha! Bali Bard, I love it. Great work mate. I can see you going over there and aussieizing them just as I have in the Philippines. Have fun and I'm positive that you'll gain a heap of poetry fodder there as I have here, in the Philippines. (I'm back here by the way, we flew in on Tuesday.)

Take care cobber and don't drink the water lol.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Well done Fez, yes I knew you were there, had a flooded home? Sorry mate, must have been sad, you've suffered worse in your life, well done, bro,

Comment from P1

Excellent

aw i have to admit i do envy you a little bit but don't begrudge you. well written poem making me long for some real sunshine. in ireland the summer hasn't visited us yet. enjoy our holiday and maybe write something pool side... if not read you in two weeks xx

 Comment Written 27-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thanks for these most gracious words and a marvellous wishes, blessings, Roy

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Well, lucky you! Bali is wonderful, so have a lovely time.

Love the alliteration of the Bali Bard. Perhaps that could be your new FanStory name!

All your usual skill at rhyme and meter remains - let's see what a couple of weeks of family and sunshine can add to the mix.

Steve

 Comment Written 27-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thanks Steve, for these most gracious words and a super review, blessings, Roy