Comment from RosieCus

Excellent

An excellent palindrome contest entry and an interesting subject chosen for this poetry style. There is a perpetual cycle of war and peace that is happening all the time somewhere in the world. Best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

I thank you for the encouraging review, high rating and good luck wishes. Unfortunately you are correct that war seems to be neverending.

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Well-written Palindrome poem. When it is kept simple it works out well both ways, like your poem here. The more complicated the message is the more difficult it is to make it work.

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thanks for the encouragment and high rating.

dragonpoet

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done Joan, excellent entry in this comtest, simple but succinctly plugged in to the requirements of this contest, there's a lot of entries in this comp. but I think yours is in the mix. Well done my friend, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 20-May-2016

Thanks for the words of encouragement and high rating, Roy.

Joan

reply by royowen on 20-May-2016

Most welcome Joan.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your palindrome entry is in good form. Your topic is unique. You expressed your beliefs well.

Since this is a site contest, I would try to add a bit to the lines to make them have more substance--just a suggestion or file 13 = trash.

Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-May-2016

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reply by the author on 20-May-2016

Thanks for the review and good wishes for the contest.

dragonpoet

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I had read this before today and I love it as much then as I do now, and all future reads. It is power packed amazing wisdom. Thank you again.

 Comment Written 19-May-2016

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reply by the author on 20-May-2016

Thanks for such high praise. I am glad you liked it enough to read more than once.

Joan

Comment from djeckert

Excellent

very good, We await the day when peace explodes war indeed ( probably when Jesus comes back to reign the new heaven and new earth.. a glorious day that will be. This is a very well done palindrome.

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 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thanks for the kind words and high rating. Unfortunately you may be right on your timing for
world peace.

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Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

You bring up some great points in this poem, even while creating the required form of turning the poem back on to itself. Wonderful job. I wish you luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thanks. I am glad you liked it.

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