Comment from arline21

Excellent

Perfect 5-7-5 poem describing sweet romance and wild passion, two opposing viewpoints of love in three beautifully written lines...thank you for posting.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thank you very much, I'm so pleased that you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Hi Ulla,
Great job with your 5/7/5 poem about passionate love. It has the correct structure and the message is clear...nothing better than being in the arms of someone you love!
Good luck in the contest!
Karen :-)

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thank so very much. all the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

A good 5-7-5 should say it all or allude to it all in the course of its seventeen syllables. This does just that therefore this must be a good 5-7-5. It is.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thanks so very much for your great review, Pantygynt. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

3 lines succinct and so true. Romantic and to the point interesting accompanying image.Good luck in the writing prompt thanks for sharing.
you have met the criteria
dip

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thanks ever so much for this great review. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from maryvellef

Good

Nice poem but words a little bit trite and over-used. Got to have a more original phrase so an image would come to your head at hearing it. Thanks for sharing and good luck.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Thanks

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine poem for the contest
exact syllables at 5-7-5
Excellent romantic imagery in the first two lines
as passion runs free
and a fine reflective thought in line three
in awaken sweet dreams
Excellent and interesting art work to match poem
Very nicely done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 02-May-2016

Thank you so much. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very good artwork.
-I like the colors and abstract quality of it.
-Good format and presentation.
-Connection is good between lines one and two.
-Line one is very effective.
-Good ending line.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 02-May-2016

Thanks ever so much. All the best. Ulla:))

reply by Pam (respa) on 02-May-2016

You are very welcome. Loved the artwork and poem.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent 5/7/5 poem for the romance contest. A bold picture to accompany ones romantic nature and feelings. Strong verbs that enhance the poem.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 02-May-2016

Thank you very much. Much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from lightink

Excellent

"awaken sweet dream" is an interesting oxymoron! I could interpret this as a lime telling us that the earlier passion was just a dream OR saying that dreams come to life with the person! Good word choice!

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 02-May-2016

Thank you very much for this great review. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

You did a wonderful job with the challenge that was presented to you. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The artwork complemented your poem.
Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice.

There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 02-May-2016

Thanks a lot for this great review, Oatmeal, much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:)