Home on the Range
Contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from beizanten
it seem like it is a poem about trouble snow bring. It interesting to see what the downside of snow is but the poem is rather boring and short. I'm sorry if I offend you.
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it seem like it is a poem about trouble snow bring. It interesting to see what the downside of snow is but the poem is rather boring and short. I'm sorry if I offend you.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
Comment from Janet Foor
Good entry for the re-write lyrics contest. I'm from northwest Pennsylvania where snow on the road was a big deal and you are right, it's best to stay home. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Good entry for the re-write lyrics contest. I'm from northwest Pennsylvania where snow on the road was a big deal and you are right, it's best to stay home. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Great rewritten lyrics. In slippery snow it is better to safely stay home, warm and cozy. Give the kids a special treat they cannot go to school anyway.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Great rewritten lyrics. In slippery snow it is better to safely stay home, warm and cozy. Give the kids a special treat they cannot go to school anyway.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Mary Wakeford
I really loved this poem, the humor, (backs/no mail/no school), although raised in mild Arizona winters, my parents both hailed from the east coast and we endured their stories growing up of walking to school in waist high white! Clever, quick, and very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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I really loved this poem, the humor, (backs/no mail/no school), although raised in mild Arizona winters, my parents both hailed from the east coast and we endured their stories growing up of walking to school in waist high white! Clever, quick, and very well done.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Eric1
Hi Johngie, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, I can see the humorous side of this but you need to include the original lyrics or you will be disqualified, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Hi Johngie, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, I can see the humorous side of this but you need to include the original lyrics or you will be disqualified, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thanks Eric. I have edited and included the info.
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Great stuff my friend.
Comment from foxangie123
This is so creative and a great set of lyrics to change. It's fun and brought a bight smile to my face and a chuckle girl real. Keep these coming. Wow-ah...
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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This is so creative and a great set of lyrics to change. It's fun and brought a bight smile to my face and a chuckle girl real. Keep these coming. Wow-ah...
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you
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Well deserved.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Johngie: I can relate to the snow and shoveling. The neighbors go by with their snow blowers and I am shoveling for a hour. They have a perfect straight line and mine is zig zag but the snow is shoveled. Snow days are to be made up so schools can get their profits. We make blizzard bread on these snow days. You have lots of humor in this. Very funny! flylikeaneagle
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Johngie: I can relate to the snow and shoveling. The neighbors go by with their snow blowers and I am shoveling for a hour. They have a perfect straight line and mine is zig zag but the snow is shoveled. Snow days are to be made up so schools can get their profits. We make blizzard bread on these snow days. You have lots of humor in this. Very funny! flylikeaneagle
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Pantygynt
According to the rules of this contest you should have included the original lyrics and singer in your notes. My memory is not that good these days but thes lyrics do not seem to match rhythmically what I remember of the original song. Anyway you must obey the rules or they'll disqualify you and you'll have wasted your money.
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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According to the rules of this contest you should have included the original lyrics and singer in your notes. My memory is not that good these days but thes lyrics do not seem to match rhythmically what I remember of the original song. Anyway you must obey the rules or they'll disqualify you and you'll have wasted your money.
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you. I have edited and included the info.
